~Acha laga~

Maheen2002 · August 26, 2004, 10:46pm

Surmayii aankhoa’n ke neeche phool se khilne lage
kehte kehte kuch, kissi ka sochna acha laga
baat tu kuch bhi na thi, lekin uss ka aik dam
haath ko hontoa’n pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

By:
Amjad Islam Amjad.

Saqi_the_angel · August 27, 2004, 11:32am

Maheen Ji,

Kaisee haiN janab, aur kahan ghaib ho gayee theiN. Kafi dinooN se Poetry section maiN app ki koi post nahiN dekhee.

baat tu kuch bhi na thi, lekin uss ka aik dam
haath ko hontoa'n pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

Bhaut khoob

Saqi

SunnyBoy · August 27, 2004, 12:03pm

:k:

Seedha_Saada · August 27, 2004, 2:30pm

:k:

K_Khan · August 28, 2004, 2:53am

very nice

reet · August 28, 2004, 4:34am

Re: ~Acha laga~

very nice and good stuff…

neeli · August 28, 2004, 6:20am

Hi,

Maheen this is one of my favourites...:) thanx for posting.. i dont have a gr8 memory there but i think it starts like this:

Bheer may ik ajnabi ka saamna acha laga
sab say chup kay woh kissi ka dekhna acha laga

Surmayii aankhoa'n ke neeche phool se khilne lage
kehte kehte kuch, kissi ka sochna acha laga

baat tu kuch bhi na thi, lekin uss ka aik dam
haath ko hontoa'n pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

Be-irada woh hansi achi lagi
kam tawaj-ju aankh ka woh dekhna acha laga

chai may cheeni milana us ghari bhaya buhat
zer-e-lab woh muskurata 'shukriya' acha laga

neem shab ki tareeki may bheeg-ti sarkon pay kal
teri yaadon kay jullo may ghoomna acha laga

us adu-e-jaan ko amjad may kaisay bura kahoon
jab bhi aaya saamnay, woh be-wafa acha laga!

Amjad Islam Amjad.

Regards,

Naila

ASA · August 28, 2004, 6:48am

very nice… my Fav… :k:

Pyara_sa_doost · August 28, 2004, 12:31pm

good stuff

keep going

tata:)

Maheen2002 · August 28, 2004, 6:28pm

Thanx everyone

Thanx neeli for the full poem

neeli · August 29, 2004, 11:40am

hey.. dont mention maheen…
an thanx every1

Nayab · August 29, 2004, 11:41am

Bohot khoob:k:

Dilsay · August 29, 2004, 10:39pm

Acha laga............ Khush rahoo

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 30, 2004, 2:24pm

Zabar10 :k:

thankx for da full ghazal neelii..

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 30, 2004, 7:14pm

nice :k: ..

Maheen2002 · August 30, 2004, 9:09pm

hehe…..thanks

Nayab & Dilsay- Thanks

Ghazaloooo: where have you been yaara? Thanks

Maheen2002 · August 30, 2004, 9:11pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *
Maheen Ji,

Kaisee haiN janab, aur kahan ghaib ho gayee theiN. Kafi dinooN se Poetry section maiN app ki koi post nahiN dekhee.

baat tu kuch bhi na thi, lekin uss ka aik dam
haath ko hontoa'n pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

Bhaut khoob

Saqi
[/QUOTE]

i am fine..Thanks for asking. bus kuch busy thi...tu kam kam hi ayi gupshup pe..how are you?

Thanx :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 31, 2004, 7:24am

awww yaara nowhere .. bus yaheen theen …

Saqi_the_angel · August 31, 2004, 10:24am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Maheen2002: *

i am fine..Thanks for asking. bus kuch busy thi...tu kam kam hi ayi gupshup pe..how are you?

Thanx :)
[/QUOTE]

Salam Janab,

Bas kuch nah hee poochiyeh. Haal behaal haiN aaj kal kaam kaafi hai aur ooper se gardan dard kar rahee hai. Aik maiN aur aap nahiN balkey yehi haal hai iss dinya ka kaam kaam aur sirf kaam.

Glad 2 hear dat u r fine.

Waiting for your taza kalam.

Tk cr

Saqi

Sharafat_Ka_Namouna · September 1, 2004, 2:46pm

Re: ~Acha laga~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Maheen2002: *
Surmayii aankhoa'n ke neeche phool se khilne lage
kehte kehte kuch, kissi ka sochna acha laga
baat tu kuch bhi na thi, lekin uss ka aik dam
haath ko hontoa'n pe rakh kar rokna acha laga

[/QUOTE]

Kis ka? ;) :p