....acha hoga

Jaan_Lewaa · November 6, 2003, 2:10pm

Mera har ek lafz teri baat se acha hoga
Mera har ek lamha teri raat se acha hoga
Itna yaad rakhna janay se phele oh zaalim
Mera tou janazah bhi teri barat se acha hoga..

Swera · November 6, 2003, 2:34pm

Re: …acha hoga

Corrcting u…

K meri to barat jay gi teri barat say pehlay:D

ok,ok
it’s nice…ur poem or shairs…

Philanthrope · November 6, 2003, 3:10pm

Mera har ek lafz teri baat se acha hoga
Mera har ek lamha teri raat se acha hoga
Itna yaad rakhna janay se phele oh zaalim
Mera tou janazah bhi teri barat se acha hoga..

hmm nice try :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 6, 2003, 7:37pm

Re: Re: ....acha hoga

thanx swera n philanthrope

Azad · November 7, 2003, 5:51am

khoob

Jaan_Lewaa · November 7, 2003, 9:36am

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
khoob
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shukriya

Azad · November 7, 2003, 9:43am

you sound like .. kissyani billi kambha nochay … Par nochnay ka bhi kia Style hay :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 7, 2003, 9:46am

Azad · November 7, 2003, 11:44am

it was about your poetry … jo bhi hay khoob hay