abi lamhay nahi bikhRay abi moasam nahi bichRay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal January 4, 2011, 4:07pm 1

December loat aao na…!

abi lamhay nahi bikhRay
abi moasam nahi bichRay

meRay kamRay ki thandak maiN
abi kuch dhoop baki hai

meRay aangaN k sab podey
abi bhi gungunaty haiN

meRay bejaaN hotoN peR
abi muskaaN baqi hai

kisi k Loat aanay ka
abi imkaaN baqi hai

December Ik baat kahuN…ageR tum maan jao to…
December…Loat aao na…!

UZ January 4, 2011, 5:46pm 2

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Nice:k:

Sheal January 4, 2011, 6:29pm 3

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very nice :k:

koyal fiker na karaiN december phir aay ga bas 2010 ki bajay 2011 ho ga

Amarbail January 4, 2011, 6:30pm 4

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Bahut khoob …:k:

I hope Poetry Forum mein old guppies dobara laut ayenge …

Amal January 4, 2011, 9:11pm 5

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4 January sey hi aap ney December ko pukaarna shuru kar dia hey. Ya Elaahi kheir :)

Shab-e-Hijar January 5, 2011, 2:18am 6

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abhi to gya ab kyu laut aye…

Shab-e-Hijar January 5, 2011, 2:19am 7

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laut aye gay .. laut aye gay inshallah

Ali_2 January 5, 2011, 3:31am 8

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beautiful sharing Koyal

Aryaan January 5, 2011, 3:40pm 9

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Good One** Koyal**..:)

Koyal January 5, 2011, 4:26pm 10

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Thanks Aryaan

Precious_Khan January 5, 2011, 5:46pm 11

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Buhat Aala Kooki Ho Koyalya !!!

Koyal January 6, 2011, 3:08pm 12

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thnaks pee^k :)

Koyal January 6, 2011, 3:09pm 13

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haan dec bhi ap ki tarha hai na wapis atey atey b tu saal lagay gha he na usay :)

Koyal January 6, 2011, 3:09pm 14

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bus dil kaRta hai na loat aa’ey

ap ko kahna chaiey tha abhi tu aa’ey hia janay ka keoN kahaiN

Koyal January 12, 2011, 4:45pm 15

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thanks sheal waiting 4 that

Koyal January 12, 2011, 4:46pm 16

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thanks

Koyal January 12, 2011, 4:48pm 17

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thanks Ali

Amal January 12, 2011, 5:01pm 18

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Look who has just flown in... :)

Koyal January 12, 2011, 8:28pm 19

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am still flowing since LOGON ne tu peR he katnay k mashwaRey dee'ay they :p

Amal January 12, 2011, 8:40pm 20

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Aap ke par kon kaat sakta hey Koyal bibi ... keep flying :)