Abhi wo dard baki hai...!

_Nazish · April 19, 2003, 12:57am

abhi wo fard baki hai
abhi us shakhs ki mujh per
nigaah-e-sard baki hai
abhi tu ishq kay rastoon ki mujh per gard baki hai
abhi wo dard baqi hai!

superb!!

Swera · April 19, 2003, 2:21am

Very good I'll say:)

Keep writing :)

XkanwalX · April 19, 2003, 3:53am

wow..awesome..loved it sis..:k:

Awaz20 · April 19, 2003, 5:26am

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kisi ko bhool janey mein
dobara dil basaney mein
abhi kuch waqat lagna hai
abhi wo dard baqi hai

.hmmmmmmmm kiya baat ahi jee lamhay aap ney kamaal likha hai realy nice kissi ko bhool janey mein .....dobara dil basaney mein abhi kuch wakt lagna hai........abhi kuch dard baki hai.......kiya kehney hain jee thanx a lot 4 sharing jee

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:05pm

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Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
nice one lamhay sis and thansk 4 sahrin..:)
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**Thanks Nikami siso!*

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:06pm

THANKS GB!

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:07pm

Shukriya ~Nazish~!

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:08pm

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Very good I'll say:)

Keep writing :)
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Thanks Swera!

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:09pm

Thanks kanwal siso!

Lamhay · April 19, 2003, 5:10pm

Re: ..

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*Originally posted by Awaz20: *
kisi ko bhool janey mein
dobara dil basaney mein
abhi kuch waqat lagna hai
abhi wo dard baqi hai

.hmmmmmmmm kiya baat ahi jee lamhay aap ney kamaal likha hai realy nice kissi ko bhool janey mein .....dobara dil basaney mein abhi kuch wakt lagna hai........abhi kuch dard baki hai.......kiya kehney hain jee thanx a lot 4 sharing jee
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Pasand karnay ka shukriya!

Philanthrope · April 19, 2003, 5:14pm

Wah …so lovely piece of poetry plus those sceneries :k:

Capricorn · April 20, 2003, 2:42pm

Re: Abhi wo dard baki hai...!

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
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Abhi wo dard baki hai
Agarchey waqat marhum hai
magar kuch waqat lagta hai
kisi ko bhool janey mein
dobara dil basaney mein
abhi kuch waqat lagna hai
abhi wo dard baqi hai
mein kaisai nayee ulfat mein apni zaat ko gum kar doon
keh mere jism-o-wajdaan mein
abhi wo fard baki hai
abhi us shakhs ki mujh per
nigaah-e-sard baki hai
abhi tu ishq kay rastoon ki mujh per gard baki hai
abhi wo dard baqi hai!

Lamhay!!!!
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Sundar alfaaz magar kateele kateele :)

Munir · April 23, 2003, 8:27am

zabar10 lamhay g us dard ko bhol jaen yaad rakhna sarsar nadani hai ap tu kufi samghdar lagti hein ;)