~ abhi shaam tuk mere bhaagh mein kaheen phool koii khila na tha..~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR February 17, 2005, 4:19pm 1

wo mehektii palko`N ki oout se koii tara chamka tha raat mien
merii bund mutthii na kholiye wohii koh-e-noor hai haath mien

mae tamaam taaray utha utha ker ghareeb logoN mien baant doun kabhii aik raat wo aasmaN ka nizaam dien mere haath mien

abhi shaam tuk mere bhaagh mien kaheen phool koii khila na tha
mujhe khushbo`ouN mien basa gaya tera pyaar aik hee raat mien

tere saath itne boht se din tu palak jhapakte guzaR gaye
hoee shaam khail hee khail mien katii raat baat hee baat mien

koii ishQ hai k akaila raitt ki shaal ourh k chal diya
kabhii baal bacho`N k saath aa ye paraaou lagta hai raat mien

kabhii saath rangoN ka phool hoon, kabhii dhoop hoon, kabhii dhool hoon mae tamaam kapre badal chuka tere mosumoN ki baraat mein

** ~ Basheer BadR~ **
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Aryaan February 17, 2005, 5:54pm 2

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Bohat khoob HeArT HaCKeR…:k:… Bohat achi choice hai aapki…

HeArT_HaCKeR February 17, 2005, 6:22pm 3

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thanks Aryaan : )

Amarbail February 17, 2005, 6:47pm 4

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tere saath itne boht se din tu palak jhapakte guzaR gaye
hoee shaam khail hee khail mien katii raat baat hee baat mien

Bahut aa’laa … :k::k::k:
Thanks for sharing !

HeArT_HaCKeR February 17, 2005, 7:33pm 5

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thankoo

K_Khan February 18, 2005, 1:22pm 6

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very nice, Heartu.

system February 18, 2005, 4:45pm 7

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Very very nice HH

HeArT_HaCKeR February 18, 2005, 5:06pm 8

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thanks kamo uncle and khamosh nigahien :)

Aceones February 22, 2005, 6:54pm 9

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nice

m_kamal February 22, 2005, 7:16pm 10

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thanx HH 4 shairing

HeArT_HaCKeR February 22, 2005, 7:41pm 11

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aceones and m kamal.. thankoo

NikamiJano February 22, 2005, 10:16pm 12

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tere saath itne boht se din tu palak jhapakte guzaR gaye
hoee shaam khail hee khail mien katii raat baat hee baat mien

one of my fav thanks for sharin heartu:)

Shab-e-Hijar February 22, 2005, 11:44pm 13

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bohat khoob :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 23, 2005, 11:18am 14

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buhat khoob HH:-)

One of the best interviews ever...

HeArT_HaCKeR February 23, 2005, 11:25am 15

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thanks for liking *nikammi.. shab-e-hijaR and gul *

Amal February 23, 2005, 7:42pm 16

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Beautiful ghazal HeArT HaCKeR :k: … Thanx for sharing

Maheen2002 February 23, 2005, 11:55pm 17

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zabardast heartu

ghazal_kisi_ke February 24, 2005, 1:03am 18

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bohut khoob .. :k:

I have Lost

HeArT_HaCKeR February 24, 2005, 6:20am 19

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thanks for liking Amal.. maheen and ghazalu..

ASA February 24, 2005, 7:09am 20

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mae tamaam taaray utha utha ker ghareeb logoN mien baant doun kabhii aik raat wo aasmaN ka nizaam dien mere haath mien

bouhat khoob, bouhat achay.. :k: