abhi hey zaRa wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magaR

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal March 1, 2011, 1:25pm 1

**abhi hey zaRa wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magaR
wo januN to kab ka khatam huwa, wo sooRat to dil sey utaR gai

mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meRi rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga sey hilaa nahi meRi saaNs phiR bhi ukhaR gai**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh March 1, 2011, 2:51pm 2

Re: abhi hey zaRa wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magaR

Poori Post kar daiteeN Amal nay konsa thread to taala laga dena tha

Amal March 1, 2011, 4:19pm 3

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Not bad :)

Amal March 1, 2011, 4:19pm 4

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Ji…ji…itney taaley nahi merey paas ke har thread pe lagaata phirooN

Aryaan March 1, 2011, 11:07pm 5

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Waqt ki kami hogi shayed.. Nice One Koyal..:)

Koyal March 2, 2011, 2:48am 6

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keoN bhi puRi keoN kabhi kabhi namukamil baatien he dil ko lag jati

waleedhbk March 2, 2011, 5:46am 7

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Nice :k:

muddii March 2, 2011, 12:27pm 8

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Brilliant as usual:)

bheegiyaad March 2, 2011, 1:57pm 9

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Koyal ka intikhab bura nahi ho sakta :k:

Lamhay March 2, 2011, 7:26pm 10

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koyal its really amazing just love it....thanks for sharing!

ehsan March 2, 2011, 7:48pm 11

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Yeh rooh thak gaye aur saans ukhar gaye, mamalma gambhir hai, doctor koh dekhain. :D

UZ March 2, 2011, 8:21pm 12

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Nice one :k:

deadsoul March 2, 2011, 9:28pm 13

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nice one koyal

muddii March 3, 2011, 3:35am 14

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Kun Sa Intikhaab?

Koyal March 3, 2011, 3:57am 15

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Koyal March 3, 2011, 3:58am 16

Re: abhi hey zaRa wo asaR jisey meRi zaat ney pooja kabhi magaR

rooh thaki tu ssans ukhRi na agaR rooh na thakti tu saans ko ukhRanay ki kia zaRorat thei :p

Koyal March 3, 2011, 3:59am 17

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thanks lamhay nice too see u afteR looooooong tame :)

Koyal March 3, 2011, 3:59am 18

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haan so tu hai koyal ka itnkhaab kesay uRa ho sakta

Amal March 3, 2011, 7:26am 19

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bheegiyaad mazaq kar rahi heiN…aap serious to nahi ho gaeiN?

Koyal March 4, 2011, 11:46am 20

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:halo: