abhi flooding kay dhagay aur bhi hian

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Cafe say agye channels aur bhi hain…
abhi flooding kay dhagay aur bhi hian…

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Re: abhi flooding kay dhagay aur bhi hian

Bewazan shair ki saza…:tamatarr:

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Re: abhi flooding kay dhagay aur bhi hian

aj kya ho gya hai sb logon ko :eek:

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kuch nahi… nashta acha kiya hai…

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nashta acha krnay se aisi shaiyri nikalti hai :confused: ainda se main bhi dhairr saraaaa nashta krun gi :cb:

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shair main kiya tabdeeli ki jasktai hai...?

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ap apni shayri mein jo marzi tabdeeli kren, but IQBAL ki shayri khrab na kren :snooty:

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me ese bohat se shair likh sakti hun:barbie:

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nahin chale gi, nahin chale gi
flooding ab nahin chale gi :snooty:

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Re: abhi flooding kay dhagay aur bhi hian

ibtada flooding hai hota hai kiya.
aagay aagay dekhiya hota hai kiya...