ab shahar meiN is kaa baadal hi nahiN koi vaisaa jaan-e-Gazal hi nahiN

NikamiJano · July 28, 2002, 9:28pm

naye kapaRe badal kar jaa’uuN kahaN aur baal banaa’uuN kis ke liye
vo shaKhs to shahar hi chhoR gayaa ab Khaak uRa’uuN kis ke liye

jis dhuup ki dil ko ThanDak thi vo dhuup usi ke saath gai
in jalti bujhti galiyoN meiN ab Khaak uRaa’uuN kis ke liye

vo shahar meiN thaa to us ke liye auroN se milnaa paRtaa thaa
ab aise-vaise logoN ke maiN naaz uThaa’uuN kis ke liye

ab shahar meiN is kaa baadal hi nahiN koi vaisaa jaan-e-Gazal hi nahiN
aivaan-e-Gazal meiN lafzoN ke guldaan sajaa’uuN kis ke liye

muddat se koi aayaa na gayaa sun_saan paRi hai ghar kii fazaa
in Khaali kamaroN meiN ‘Nasir’ ab shammaa jalaa’uuN kis ke liye

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

ToO_hOt_2_StoP · July 28, 2002, 9:32pm

I love this Ghazal

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Muddi · July 28, 2002, 10:58pm

Tum Koo Maloom Sahee Mujh Koo Too Maloom Nahee
Dard Jub Lutf Key Manzil Say Guzar Jaata Hai
Na Dilasoon Say Bahulta Hai Tarpta Howa Dil
Na Nigahoon Ko Kisee Toor Qarar Aata Hai

Hmmmmmmmm Suchi.........wink wink ~~~
[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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naye kapaRe badal kar jaa'uuN kahaN aur baal banaa'uuN kis ke liye
vo shaKhs to shahar hi chhoR gayaa ab Khaak uRa'uuN kis ke liye

jis dhuup ki dil ko ThanDak thi vo dhuup usi ke saath gai
in jalti bujhti galiyoN meiN ab Khaak uRaa'uuN kis ke liye

vo shahar meiN thaa to us ke liye auroN se milnaa paRtaa thaa
ab aise-vaise logoN ke maiN naaz uThaa'uuN kis ke liye

ab shahar meiN is kaa baadal hi nahiN koi vaisaa jaan-e-Gazal hi nahiN
aivaan-e-Gazal meiN lafzoN ke guldaan sajaa'uuN kis ke liye

muddat se koi aayaa na gayaa sun_saan paRi hai ghar kii fazaa
in Khaali kamaroN meiN 'Nasir' ab shammaa jalaa'uuN kis ke liye

**
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Meiji

Tassneef · July 29, 2002, 12:26am

waaaahh Nikkammi Sahibaa waahhhhhhhh
arz kyia hai

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**Nass Nass meiN bassa hai piyaar uskaa aur “Shaakir” kaissi Uljhan hai
Usse yaad rakhooN to apne lyie ,bhool jaouN to maiN kiss ke liye<7B>

Eastern_Thoughts · July 29, 2002, 5:27am

Nice One Janoo Ji!

us ko judaa hue bhii zamaanaa bahut huaa
ab kyaa kahe.n ye qissaa puraanaa bahut huaa

ab tak to dil ka dil se taarruf na ho sakaa
maanaa ki us se milanaa milaanaa bahut huaa

lo phir tere labo.n pe usii bevafaa kaa zikr
ahmad ‘Faraz’ tujh se kahaa naa bahut huaa

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thori dair tu huns laynay daytay…

Capricorn · July 29, 2002, 8:53am

Interesting, dhoop kee thandak!!! yeh pagal bara siyana lagta hai

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I like this ghazal and love to hear it.

ShaRaRa · July 29, 2002, 9:55am

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ghazal, that man has a koool voice!!

“i LoVe ThE SOUND Of A BrEaKiNg gLaSS”

chand_chehra · July 29, 2002, 5:46pm

us becharay ko khas say allergy thi isliye shehar chor gya becara

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anwayz nice

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

Rameesha · July 30, 2002, 4:25pm

[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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naye kapaRe badal kar jaa'uuN kahaN aur baal banaa'uuN kis ke liye
vo shaKhs to shahar hi chhoR gayaa ab Khaak uRa'uuN kis ke liye

jis dhuup ki dil ko ThanDak thi vo dhuup usi ke saath gai
in jalti bujhti galiyoN meiN ab Khaak uRaa'uuN kis ke liye

vo shahar meiN thaa to us ke liye auroN se milnaa paRtaa thaa
ab aise-vaise logoN ke maiN naaz uThaa'uuN kis ke liye

ab shahar meiN is kaa baadal hi nahiN koi vaisaa jaan-e-Gazal hi nahiN
aivaan-e-Gazal meiN lafzoN ke guldaan sajaa'uuN kis ke liye

muddat se koi aayaa na gayaa sun_saan paRi hai ghar kii fazaa
in Khaali kamaroN meiN 'Nasir' ab shammaa jalaa'uuN kis ke liye

**
[/quote]

oh NJ kya yaad dila diya ... ab dhondhi parhey gi sunneney key liye , pata naheen kiss koney meiN he ... excellent selection .. thanks for sharing yara ...

Nayab · July 30, 2002, 4:44pm

Bohot khoob

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NikamiJano · July 31, 2002, 6:32pm

wink wink bohat kaartey ap nikami ko

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kher hai na

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thanks anyways aur guyaeb kahan hian ap

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano · July 31, 2002, 6:35pm

shukria anyways

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano · July 31, 2002, 6:38pm

u know har pagal he sayana hota ap ko nahi pata

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..oh u love to hear but me suna nahi sakti k speaker nahi hia…

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…

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano · July 31, 2002, 6:40pm

thanks ThTs..Rameesha g nayab g Sharara and shakir…

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano · July 31, 2002, 6:44pm

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and thanks EastreN from WestraN…

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Capricorn · August 1, 2002, 4:54pm

Uffffff mein samjha ke aap ke kaan naheen hain

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NikamiJano · August 1, 2002, 5:22pm

hamrey kaan be hain

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be hain aur

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be hia aur

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be aur ;p be

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Eastern_Thoughts · August 2, 2002, 1:40pm

Mic use hoota hay Sunnay kay leay, Speaker nahi

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thori dair tu huns laynay daytay…

Capricorn · August 2, 2002, 4:00pm

Nikii yeh wohi siyana hai

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Azam_1 · August 4, 2002, 11:15am

**
nikami ji .. kis ne kaha ke main shahar chhoR gaya hoon ???

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main to abhi tak yaheen dhakey kha raha hoon

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saboot ke tor par arz kiya he ..

awara he galiyoon me, main or meri tanhaai ..
jain to kahan jain, har mooR pe ruswai ..
main or meri tanhaai …

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**

I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.