ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii

Capricorn · February 5, 2003, 7:20pm

ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii
aa chuke ab to shab-o-roz azaabo.n vaale

ab to sab dashnaa-o-Khanjar kii zubaa.N bolate hai.n
ab kahaa.N log muhabbat ke nisaabo.n vaale

zindaa rahane kii tamannaa ho to ho jaate hai.n
faaKhtaao.n ke bhii kirdaar uqaabo.n vaale

na mere zaKhm khile hai.n na teraa rang-e-hinaa
mausam aaye hii nahii.n ab ke gulaabo.n vaale

Dilsay · February 5, 2003, 8:21pm

Nice...........

Aalhan · February 5, 2003, 9:20pm

**Kinda sad :-( I really liked this
couplet though.

[Quote]
Originally posted by Capricorn:
zindaa rahane kii tamannaa ho to ho jaate hai.n
faaKhtaao.n ke bhii kirdaar uqaabo.n vaale

[/Quote]

The comparison between a 'fakhta and an
uqaab in relation to the symbolism has been
used very befittingly.**

chand_chehra · February 5, 2003, 9:24pm

Re: ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii

very nice :k:

Dragon_King · February 5, 2003, 10:18pm

buhat khoob :k:

nikii · February 5, 2003, 10:44pm

bhut khoob capri ji :k:

Paglee · February 6, 2003, 2:00am

nice one thanks 4 sharing.....:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 6, 2003, 3:07am

bohtu khoob:k::k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 6, 2003, 12:46pm

Re: ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii
aa chuke ab to shab-o-roz azaabo.n vaale

ab to sab dashnaa-o-Khanjar kii zubaa.N bolate hai.n
ab kahaa.N log muhabbat ke nisaabo.n vaale

zindaa rahane kii tamannaa ho to ho jaate hai.n
faaKhtaao.n ke bhii kirdaar uqaabo.n vaale

na mere zaKhm khile hai.n na teraa rang-e-hinaa
mausam aaye hii nahii.n ab ke gulaabo.n vaale
[/QUOTE]

Very Nice Capii, Thanks for sharing :)

Capricorn · February 6, 2003, 1:10pm

Thanks every body :k:

XChorniX · February 6, 2003, 2:42pm

very nice :k:

Capricorn · February 6, 2003, 3:10pm

Thanks

Amal · February 6, 2003, 5:36pm

Re: ab naye saal kii mohalat nahii.n milane vaalii

beautiful ghazal Cap:k:…thanx for sharing:)

system · February 6, 2003, 6:41pm

Beautiful :k::k:

Capricorn · February 6, 2003, 7:14pm

Thanks Amal and Viva :k:

_kashish · February 7, 2003, 11:45am

na mere zaKhm khile hai.n na teraa rang-e-hinaa
mausam aaye hii nahii.n ab ke gulaabo.n vaale

bohat khoob!

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 7, 2003, 12:00pm

nice:k:

Bhooli_Bisri · February 7, 2003, 1:12pm

achi kavish hai janab bahut umddah

Capricorn · February 8, 2003, 7:46am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *kashish: *
na mere zaKhm khile hai.n na teraa rang-e-hinaa
mausam aaye hii nahii.n ab ke gulaabo.n vaale

bohat khoob!
[/QUOTE]

Thanks....aap kahan ghaib ho jatee hain bethe bithaye? :) I like your posts here but you are not regular these days. I hope everthing is okay with you :)

Capricorn · February 8, 2003, 7:48am

Thank you