ab Muqaddar samajh main aa gaya na

Man_de_Mouj · March 14, 2003, 6:37am

muqaddar phir say aaRay aa gaya na
gulab es baar bhi murjha gaya na

kaha bhi tha ke palkain moondna mat
kisi ka khawb phir chounka gaya na

bhula baythay thay jis ko tum achanak
phir aglay mour par takra gaya na

mayree haalat pay tum hayrat zada thay
tumhain bhi dasht aakhir bha gaya na

zara bhi paon main larzish naheen hay
hamain kantoon pay chalna aa gaya na

ousay jatay hoay daykha hi keon tha
woh manzar aank main pathra gaya na

wohi milna, bicharna, toot jana
kahani waqt phir dohra gaya na

muhabbat es jahan ki shaay naheen hay
samajh main ab tumharee aa gaya na

kaha tha hijar palkoon say na choonanna
amawas aankh main tehraa gaya na

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 14, 2003, 6:40am

niceeee:k::k:
thanks:~)

Dilsay · March 14, 2003, 7:49am

Beautiful and thanks for sharing...

Philanthrope · March 14, 2003, 8:13am

Wah...Zabardast... Lovely Choice...
aab main jealous hona shoro ho rahe hon ...yeh ittni ache ache collection kahan se mil rahe hai janab ? lolz

SunnyBoy · March 14, 2003, 8:57am

Nice :k:

Man_de_Mouj · March 14, 2003, 12:00pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Wah...Zabardast... Lovely Choice...
aab main jealous hona shoro ho rahe hon ...yeh ittni ache ache collection kahan se mil rahe hai janab ? lolz
[/QUOTE]

lolzzz aap hi jaisay loogon say jeenay ka aur estaqamat ka saleeqa layta hoon....

thanks for liking Ambreen

nikii · March 14, 2003, 1:50pm

zaberdast :k:

Capricorn · March 14, 2003, 3:22pm

Re: ~~ab Muqaddar samajh main aa gaya na ~~

Wah :k:

Philanthrope · March 14, 2003, 5:43pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *

lolzzz aap hi jaisay loogon say jeenay ka aur estaqamat ka saleeqa layta hoon....

thanks for liking Ambreen
[/QUOTE]
Lolz... aab aaise bhi baat nahi ... anyway you are Welcome..

system · March 14, 2003, 8:22pm

Beautifulll :k::k:

Pramod · March 14, 2003, 8:29pm

bahot achhi ghazal hai Man de Mouj.

thanks for sharing......

XChorniX · March 15, 2003, 3:49am

bohot khoob :k:

weteyes82 · March 15, 2003, 4:04am

simply a marvellous piece of poetry!

muhabbat es jahan ki shaay naheen hay
samajh main ab tumharee aa gaya na

shaay=thing ??

did I get it right
and plz do write the poets name.

Philanthrope · March 15, 2003, 8:27pm

Exactly weteyes… you’ve got it right… Shaay means thing..

ameen · March 15, 2003, 8:39pm

Re: ~~ab Muqaddar samajh main aa gaya na ~~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *

bhula baythay thay jis ko tum achanak
phir aglay mour par takra gaya na

mayree haalat pay tum hayrat zada thay
tumhain bhi dasht aakhir bha gaya na

[/QUOTE]

beautiful.