Ab mujahay jana hai

Dilsay · February 19, 2003, 4:01pm

**Ab mujahay jana hai
Mari jaan aab mujahay jana hai
Tumahari yaad kay saharay jeena hai
Tumahari nafrat ko Dilsay laga kar
Teray faislay par roona hai
Har moor hoo ga tanhayee ka
Har moor hoo ga ruswai ka
Har ahh ho ge barfeeli
Har zakhma hoo ga taza sa
Kabhi jo tu tanaha hoo ga
Mari yaad tum ko aya gee
Mujahay talab hai tari
Tujahay khawaish hai judai kee
Lambay safar par jana hai
Lambi neend soona hai
Kabhi ho jo guzar tara
Akheeri safar gaha say
Rook kar tum dekh leena
Kabar ke namee ko
Phool wo he sookha sa
Jo aab tak sanbahal rakha hai
Muskura kar tum ko dekhay ga
Dua tum ko ya day ga
Shukar hai ka tum dee
Ansoonoon say nam mati
Phir kahay ga tum ko wo
Ab mujahay tu rahat hai
Dard hai tu andar hai
Ankh naam na karna tum
Khak baas ura deena

by Dilsay **

Azad · February 19, 2003, 4:09pm

Ab mujahay tu rahat hai
Dard hai tu andar hai
Ankh naam na karna tum
Khak baas ura deena

Beautiful :k:

Philanthrope · February 19, 2003, 5:02pm

Re: Ab mujahay jana hai

Wah…Bohat khoob
keep writing :k:

udaasaankhein · February 19, 2003, 5:31pm

very nice....:)

Bhooli_Bisri · February 19, 2003, 7:25pm

Re: Ab mujahay jana hai

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *
**Ab mujahay jana hai
Mari jaan aab mujahay jana hai
Tumahari yaad kay saharay jeena hai
Tumahari nafrat ko **Dilsay* laga kar
Teray faislay par roona hai
Har moor hoo ga tanhayee ka
Har moor hoo ga ruswai ka
Har ahh ho ge barfeeli
Har zakhma hoo ga taza sa
Kabhi jo tu tanaha hoo ga
Mari yaad tum ko aya gee
Mujahay talab hai tari
Tujahay khawaish hai judai kee
Lambay safar par jana hai
Lambi neend soona hai
Kabhi ho jo guzar tara
Akheeri safar gaha say
Rook tum dekh leena
Kabar ke namee ko tum
Phool wo he sookha sa
Jo aab tak sanbahal rakha hai
Muskura kar tum ko dekhay ga
Dua tum ko ya day ga
Shukar hai ka tum dee
Ansoonoon say nam mati
Phir kahay ga tum ko wo
Ab mujahay tu rahat hai
Dard hai tu andar hai
Ankh naam na karna tum
Khak baas ura deena

by Dilsay **
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bhai dilsay ye bahut hi achi kavish hai ap ne lafzoon ka bahut khobsurati se istemal keya hai ke har lafz se ap ke dard ki shiddat ka bakhobi andaza hota hai

ullujii · February 19, 2003, 8:45pm

very cool..

guybrush · February 19, 2003, 9:18pm

nice yaar
lets see wat Azad has to say about it

weteyes82 · February 19, 2003, 9:20pm

beautiful! keep up the good work! :)

Dilsay · February 20, 2003, 4:18am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by guybrush: *
nice yaar
lets see wat Azad has to say about it
[/QUOTE]

Azad has already replied.... and his reply is nice seems like this has also touched his heart.... baas dilsay jo behi kaha jaya dil ko to acha he lagay gaa na.....

_Nazish · February 20, 2003, 6:26am

Wah dilsay ji, can’t decide which part to quote, nazm saari he bohat khubsurat hai.

keep it up :k:

Dilsay · February 20, 2003, 8:35am

Thanks every one.....

system · February 20, 2003, 7:19pm

Bohat khoob, Dilsay… :k::k: bohat acha likhtey hain aap..

tunhaye · February 20, 2003, 7:53pm

buhat khub

Dilsay · February 21, 2003, 5:49am

Thansk V and t

Lamhay · February 21, 2003, 6:49am

sorry ji abhi dekha

Kiya kehna aap ki posting ka gr8 one!

Per aap ko jana kahan hai?? ;)

Dilsay · February 21, 2003, 6:53am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
sorry ji abhi dekha

Kiya kehna aap ki posting ka gr8 one!

Per aap ko jana kahan hai?? ;)
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ha haaa

sari kahani soonanay kaay baad pooch rahee hain ka lala larkee tha ka larka....

aap nay sath chalna hai... jahan mainay jana hai... ?

Lamhay · February 21, 2003, 6:58am

main kyo chaloon main yahin fit hoon !!

Azad · February 21, 2003, 7:03am

kiss kay saat?

Dilsay · February 21, 2003, 7:05am

good to know that you ar fit.... aap nahi jaa rahee hoo tu phir hum behi nahi jatay.....

Lamhay · February 21, 2003, 7:06am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

kiss kay saat? :)
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apnay bhaiyoon behnoo aur dostoon k saath :)