Ab laut aao na!!

EEMAAN · October 10, 2006, 11:36am

Tum nay kaha tha!
Jab tum siyah rang pehno gi
Jab tumharay haseen hathon ki
**Nazuk choorian shor machain gi **
Mai laut aaon ga

Tum nay kaha tha!
Jab hanstay chehray ki aankh roye gi
**Aur dil ki dharkan **
Sirf mere naam per dharkay gi
Mai laut aaon ga

Aaj mai kehti hoon!
Meri aankhain ro pari hain
Tumharay baad saari umr
Siyah rang mein guzri hay
Ab laut aao na!

Dharkanain tumharay naam per dharakti hain
Mai nay apni kaanch ki choorion ko
Is lamhay bhi khamosh nahi rakha
Daikho!!
Ab laut aao na!!!

goodnews · October 10, 2006, 12:11pm

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good one but :(

Amal · October 10, 2006, 1:20pm

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Very nice but very sad :(

Prince_Ali · October 10, 2006, 3:24pm

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Zabardast but

dil_ki_awaz · October 10, 2006, 7:39pm

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very nice eeman.
is it urs?

goodnews · October 10, 2006, 8:07pm

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Toba Astghfar kysa manhoos smily hy dykh kr hamdardi ky bjay dil krta hy aik rypta dy ky maron

goodnews · October 10, 2006, 8:08pm

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Looks like not her because it is in "INtikhab" Shr o Gupshup main keh sakty hain ky ap ki apni hy magar aj kal 75% Dosron ki shairi apni keh kr post kr rahy hain MODS bhi move kr kr ky thak chuky hain:D

Muslim_girl_1 · October 10, 2006, 11:20pm

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^^Wah GN.....kya comment diya hai....dil khush ker diya...kasme....!!!!!!!!

goodnews · October 11, 2006, 1:19am

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Shukriya MG! :D

EEMAAN · October 11, 2006, 11:22am

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thanks....all

jee nahee dil ki awaz yeh nazm meri nahee hay,,GN sahee keh rahi hain agar meri hoti tou Intikhaab mein nahi balkeh shur e GupShup mein hoti,,aur poet ka naam bhi mujhe maloom nahee kionkeh aap ka next question yehi ho ga,,i guess:)...waisay pasand kernay ka bohat shukria,,

dil_ki_awaz · October 11, 2006, 12:14pm

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goodnews batanay ka sukariya ;)

MARRIED_NY · October 11, 2006, 12:37pm

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UUFFFF,,
ARRAY Wellsaid eemaan

dil_ki_awaz · October 11, 2006, 12:50pm

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eeman ji lagta hai ap ko tareef passand nahi

ya ap samaji ti ho kay ap ki post is qable nahi...

chalayn ap beiter samaj sakhti ho apnay apko...:)

dil_ki_awaz · October 11, 2006, 12:52pm

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married ji kia ap ki shadi ka kharch eeman say pora kia tha??????

(k) :)

dil_ki_awaz · October 11, 2006, 12:55pm

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married ji kia ap ki shadi ka kharch eeman nay pora kia tha???

goodnews · October 11, 2006, 1:47pm

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Koi bat nahi yeh tu mera fraz tha

EEMAAN · October 11, 2006, 2:19pm

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lol,,,aesi koi baat nahee dil ki awaz,,yeh mai nay is liay likha keh pehlay bhi meri 2,3 posts per aap nay yehi sawal poocha aur phir poet ka naam poocha,,,thats y is baar mai nay pehlay hi jawab day dia,,achay bachay naraz nahee hotay:)....aur plz married sis ko kuch matt kahain,,i request u..

Ehsass · October 11, 2006, 3:50pm

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buhat khoob EEMAAN

dil_ki_awaz · October 12, 2006, 6:35am

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lol,,,aesi koi baat nahee dil ki awaz,,yeh mai nay is liay likha keh pehlay bhi meri 2,3 posts per aap nay yehi sawal poocha aur phir poet ka naam poocha,,,thats y is baar mai nay pehlay hi jawab day dia,,achay bachay naraz nahee hotay:)....aur plz married sis ko kuch matt kahain,,i request u..
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nahi ji may naraz nahi..
i m just kidding...
waissay atna tu batahoo ya poetry... atni nice poetry tum ko milti kahan say hai ;)

mahamkhan · October 12, 2006, 6:48am

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Buhat acchi....Eemaan