Ab ke us ki ankhoN maiN

_kashish · January 10, 2003, 3:21pm

Adab!

bohat dinon baad mehfile Gupshup main meri janib se kuch hazire khidmat hai

Ab ke us ki ankhoN maiN
Be sabab udasi thi
Ab ke us ke chehre per
Dukh tha , be hawasi thi!

Ab ke yooN mila mujh se
YooN ghazal suni jese
Main bhi na shanasa hooN
Who bhi, ajnabi jese !

Zard khalo khad us ke
Saugawar daman tha
Ab ke us ke lehje main
Kitna khurdara pan tha!

Who ke umar bhar jis ne
Shehar bhar ke logoN maiN
Mujhko humsukhan jana
Dil se aashna likha
Khud se meharbaN samjha
Mujhko “dilruba” likha

Ab ke sada kaghaz per
Surkh roshna’ee se
Us ne talkh lehje main
Mere naam se pehle!
Sirf “be wafa” likha…..

Dilsay · January 10, 2003, 3:37pm

Nice and welcome back....

guybrush · January 10, 2003, 3:50pm

very nice :k:

Amal · January 10, 2003, 5:15pm

Re: Ab ke us ki ankhoN maiN

Beautiful…:k::)…thanx for sharing

Capricorn · January 10, 2003, 5:17pm

Buhat khoobsurat nazm hai kashish and welcome back
Aap ko “Dilruba” aur “Bewafa” jaise takhallus dene wala hai kaun? BTW these two are contradictory terms!

arifnawaz1 · January 10, 2003, 6:53pm

Ab ke sada kaghaz per
Surkh roshna’ee se
Us ne talkh lehje main
Mere naam se pehle!
Sirf “bewafa” likha…..

So true :k::k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 10, 2003, 7:29pm

very nice:k::k: and welcome back:flower1:

XkanwalX · January 10, 2003, 8:11pm

boahtt khoob :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 10, 2003, 8:41pm

Very Nice Kashish*, Thanks for sharing:)
&Welcome back:flower1:

nikii · January 10, 2003, 8:44pm

wowww kasahish reallly amazing :k:
thxs 4 sharing

chand_chehra · January 10, 2003, 9:50pm

Nice :k:

Rameesha · January 10, 2003, 9:59pm

nice :k: & welcome back

Azad · January 11, 2003, 7:10am

nice selection thanks for sharing and
welcome back

Aalhan · January 11, 2003, 2:48pm

Vah---
Aap to jab tashreef lati haiN taqreeban
hamaisha hi la javab intaykhaab kay
saath. Sadeningly beautiful.

_kashish · January 11, 2003, 7:49pm

Aap sab ki paseendeedigi ka bohat bohat shukria :) and thanx for the warm welcome, and i wasnt really away from GS....bas kuch postings nahin ker paee...

_kashish · January 11, 2003, 7:51pm

kitna mushkil sawal pucha hai aap ne bhi ( as if im really gonna tell you ) … kabhi kabhi contradictory terms , ek se ma’nay bhi to rakhti hain, dekhne wali nazar chahiyey, BTW ghazal meri apni nahin hai

_kashish · January 11, 2003, 7:54pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Aalhan: *
**Vah---
Aap to jab tashreef lati haiN taqreeban
hamaisha hi la javab intaykhaab kay
saath. Sadeningly beautiful.*
[/QUOTE]

bohat shukria!!

you have always been generous with the compliments you know :)

Capricorn · January 12, 2003, 6:14am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *kashish: *

kitna mushkil sawal pucha hai aap ne bhi ( as if im really gonna tell you :p ) .... kabhi kabhi contradictory terms , ek se ma'nay bhi to rakhti hain, dekhne wali nazar chahiyey, BTW ghazal meri apni nahin hai :)
[/QUOTE]

Haan mushkil to hai magar koi baat naheen agar naheen bata raheen to; mein kaunsa serious tha poochne mein? :p
Regarding contradictory terms having same meaning......I am surprised! How cud I be so ignorant!

Perfectionist · January 12, 2003, 4:10pm

Re: Ab ke us ki ankhoN maiN

Beautiful poem kashish jee.
You do have a nice taste of shairee :k:

Galaxy · January 12, 2003, 4:13pm

excellent........i admire this one