aanish
July 20, 2007, 12:46pm
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Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge…
Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge woh jaane waale
Ab to yeh khawb bhee haiN dil ko dukhane waale
MaiN ne ik umr huee roothna bhee chor diya hai
Kiss se roothooN, kahaN haiN woh manaane waale
Woh bhee ab dil se utar jaaye ga youN lagta hai
Uss k andaaz bhee huway jaate haiN zamaane waale
Woh kahaN hai, kissay saath liye phirta hai
Mujh ko kyuN ab bhee batate haiN bataane waale
Hum unheiN bhoolne kii karen laakh saee lakin
Dil se kab jaate haiN yeh dil ko churaane waale
Aanish
Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge...........
aap rootho mein hoon na :p
Very nice try aanish sis, keep sharing:-)
rkopra
July 20, 2007, 2:38pm
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Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge…
Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge…
Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge woh jaane waale
Ab to yeh khawb bhee haiN dil ko dukhane waale
MaiN ne ik umr huee roothna bhee chor diya hai
Kiss se roothooN, kahaN haiN woh manaane waale
Woh bhee ab dil se utar jaaye ga youN lagta hai
Uss k andaaz bhee huway jaate haiN zamaane waale
Woh kahaN hai, kissay saath liye phirta hai
Mujh ko kyuN ab bhee batate haiN bataane waale
Hum unheiN bhoolne kii karen laakh saee lakin
Dil se kab jaate haiN yeh dil ko churaane waale
Aanish
*will he ever return
the one who always leaves?
now my dreams pain my heart.
it has been ages since
I’ve shown any displeasure.
whom do I tell all this?
who’s there to console me?
my heart will forget him soon
that’s what I feel now.
he has become like others
who don’t care for love.
where’s he?
whom has he been dating?
why people come to me
and tell all this?
I might try forgetting him
a hundred-thousand times,
but how can my heart forget?
he tried to steal it.*
http://www.shayarfamily.com/index.php?act=ST&f=12&t=13696
Note: It appears Amal has been missing my translations.
So I would not like to disappoint him.
aanish
July 21, 2007, 3:38pm
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Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge...........
aap rootho mein hoon na :p
Very nice try aanish sis, keep sharing:-)
Thank you Gul , iss ta'reef k liye bhi aor offer k liye bhi. Ab maira jab bhi roothne ko dil chaha to aap ko bata dooN gi. aap manaane wali baneN gi na? :)
aanish
July 21, 2007, 3:56pm
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Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge…
Very precise translation rkopra .
rkopra
July 21, 2007, 6:41pm
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Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge…
You’re welcome. Please click at the following link and see how many people liked your poem.
http://www.shayarfamily.com/index.php?showtopic=13696
PS: If you have any objection to my posting your porm there, please let me know, I will delete it. Regards.
aanish
July 23, 2007, 10:50am
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Re: Ab kahaN lote ke aayeN ge...........
PS: If you have any objection to my posting your porm there, please let me know, I will delete it. Regards.
No, I don't mind it . Thanks.