raastay kathin to na thay
per na thi manzil duur itni
khwaab adhooray to na thay
per na itni pyaas itni
gar koshish ki itni hum nay per nakaam ho gai saari
umeed ka he aasara tha per justuju he thi aadhi
waqt kis terha mera saath dayta
ruh ko kaisay mein saber dilati…
her lamha gar intezar rehta
aaj b himat hai meri jaari!!!
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Nice :k:
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Nice!
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There are many mistakes in this poetry... This is not according to the rules of poetry...
when it comes to expressing feelings.. rules doesn't matter much.
I would, however. like you to point out those mistakes
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nazam hey ya ghazal?