ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 22, 2003, 1:00pm

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nakaam hasraton k siwa kuch nahi raha
duniya mein ab dhukoon k siwa kuch nahi raha

ik umer ho gayee hai dil ki kitaab mein
chund khusk paton k siwa kuch nahi raha

yaadein kuch is tarah se sama-t per chah gayeen
pichlee rafaQaton k siwa kuch nahi raha

lub sii liye tu apne hee kamre mein youn laga
khaamosh aainon k siwa kuch nahi raha

jazbay tamam kho gay lamhoon ki dhool mein
ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha*

Amarbail1 · August 22, 2003, 1:07pm

ik umer ho gayee hai dil ki kitaab mein
chund khusk paton k siwa kuch nahi raha

jazbay tamam kho gay lamhoon ki dhool mein
ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

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Simply da great …:k: thanks for sharing HH

Amal · August 22, 2003, 1:29pm

Re: ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

great choice HeArT HaCKeR:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 22, 2003, 1:29pm

thanks for liking Amarbail

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 22, 2003, 1:30pm

Re: Re: ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

thanks for liking Amal bhaiyya

dil khush ker diya hai ap ne :~)

TajMahal · August 22, 2003, 3:32pm

bahut khoob Heart hacker!

XkanwalX · August 22, 2003, 3:52pm

wah...

system · August 22, 2003, 4:12pm

very Nice :k:

Pramod · August 22, 2003, 4:54pm

lub sii liye tu apne hee kamre mein youn laga
khaamosh aainon k siwa kuch nahi raha

jazbay tamam kho gay lamhoon ki dhool mein
ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

Bahot khub.

Thanks for sharing ...** HeArT HaCKeR **

Black_Mamba · August 22, 2003, 5:02pm

do teen annsooN ke siwa kuch nahiN raha mera, teray ghamoN ke siwa kuch nahiN raha

Unka bhulaana hum ko, hamaiN maar hi gaya
apna to in dukhoN ke siwa kuch nahiN raha

ham un ko bhool payiN ge apna tha ye kayal
ab unke chahatoN ke siwa, kuch nahiN raha

ham iss jahaN ko choR ke, chaltay tunharay saath
ab aisi hasratoN ke siwa kuch nahiN raha

gar zindagi yahi hai, to iss zindagi maiN ab
har waqt ke dukhoN ke siwa kuch nahiN raha
(Black Mamba)

And I think I dont have to say that I liked it. Cuz meray andar soya hua shayir kabhi kabhi jaagta hai. And this poem awakened him.

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 22, 2003, 9:39pm

excellent:k::k::k:
thankx:-/

K_Khan · August 22, 2003, 11:01pm

kia huwa bhateeju …

:k: very nice …

Koyal · August 23, 2003, 1:17am

nice one Hh achi chez baar baar parnay main acha lagta :)

system · August 23, 2003, 5:53am

Very Nice…

Capricorn · August 23, 2003, 6:41am

Re: ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *

jazbay tamam kho gay lamhoon ki dhool mein
ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha* :(
[/QUOTE]

Shukar karo na :p

Arzoo78 · August 23, 2003, 7:02pm

beautiful

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 23, 2003, 7:53pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by TajMahal: *
bahut khoob Heart hacker!
[/QUOTE]

thanks for liking Taj, xkanwalx and viv :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 23, 2003, 7:56pm

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 23, 2003, 7:59pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
lub sii liye tu apne hee kamre mein youn laga
khaamosh aainon k siwa kuch nahi raha

jazbay tamam kho gay lamhoon ki dhool mein
ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

Bahot khub.

Thanks for sharing ...** HeArT HaCKeR **
[/QUOTE]

thanks for liking Pramod bhaiya and GKK

Kamo uncle mujhe kuch nahi howa.. ho bhee nahi sakta ;)

koyal oh! is ka mutlb ap ye pehle bhee parh chukee ho hai na? thanks waisay pasand kerne ka...

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 23, 2003, 8:00pm

Re: Re: ab dil mein dharkanon k siwa kuch nahi raha

ye baat shukr kerne ki nahi hai

thanks for likingAarzoo and khamosh nigahein