AB BHI KAALI RATON MAI...

Shazia_Arif · August 7, 2010, 7:04am

**ab bhi kaali raton main phir takiah bheega kerta hai
ikk aahatt si dil mai hoti hai,koi sog manaya kerta hai

dehleez pe a ke kuch bhatke punchi ansu asnu rote hain
koi in ko apni yadon ka phir dana dala kerta hai

be-kaif si her shay lagti hai,be-ronaq si zandano main
koi qaid mai bhi masroor hai bas keh naghme gaya kerta hai

jo hosh mai bhi deewana hai,talkhi bhi amrit jane hai
uss dana ko pagal samjho jo sach batlaya kerta hai

jo toot ke barsa kerta tha kal toot gaya wo chupke se
woh kese jurre ga phir mujh se jo toot ke jurr na paya hai…**

Amarbail · August 7, 2010, 5:58pm

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Bahut hi khoobsurat …:k:
Keep writing Shazia Arif and thanks for sharing …

Shazia_Arif · August 8, 2010, 6:05am

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thanx Amerbail:)

system · August 9, 2010, 6:32pm

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*o hosh mai bhi deewana hai,talkhi bhi amrit jane hai
uss dana ko pagal samjho jo sach batlaya kerta hai
*

really amazing stuff

rajey · August 14, 2010, 1:15pm

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woh kaha karte the, ki toot kar pyaar karte hain
ab such hai ki dil toota hua hai, aur pyar bhi unse karte hain...

nice Shazia... dear...

Shazia_Arif · August 14, 2010, 2:28pm

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thank you Raje and nice kid.

Aryaan · August 14, 2010, 10:14pm

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jo toot ke barsa kerta tha kal toot gaya wo chupke se
woh kese jurre ga phir mujh se jo toot ke jurr na paya hai…

Bohat Khoob Shazia..:k:

Shazia_Arif · August 15, 2010, 5:18am

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thanx Aryan.

Tklucky8 · August 16, 2010, 10:13pm

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Wow. Amazing!

punjabi_kuri_1 · August 16, 2010, 11:54pm

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:k:its just wowwwwwwwwww

lethal_kamikaze · August 18, 2010, 9:52pm

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Zabardast

ab bhi kaali raton main phir takiah bheega kerta hai <----

Shazia_Arif · August 20, 2010, 5:11am

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thanx 4 liking every one.
why you are confuse Kami,i think itna b mushkil nhi likh dia.

lethal_kamikaze · August 20, 2010, 5:23pm

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^
Mujeh takiya ke bheegna samajh nahi aya

AuntyNumber1 · August 20, 2010, 6:26pm

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takiya ansoo se bheeg raha hae na :--) means crying during the night...

Shazia, nice work!

lethal_kamikaze · August 20, 2010, 6:49pm

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^
pr andheeri raat yani ke darkness mein kaise nazar aya

Shazia_Arif · August 21, 2010, 5:32am

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thanx for likin aunty n vanishing kami's confusion.

Azad · August 21, 2010, 7:32am

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maza nahi aya

lethal_kamikaze · August 21, 2010, 8:23am

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Yupe Azad kuch missin hy ismein.

SA my confustion is still there

Shazia_Arif · August 24, 2010, 8:22am

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i think there is nothing so much confusing,you feel the wetness. poetry has always a hidden language,it lost its beauty if desribe very clearly,hope ab toh samajh a gaya hoga.

Shazia_Arif · August 24, 2010, 8:23am

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thanx for not liking :)