Aay umer -e- rawaaN! Aahista chal

Kuch khwaab haiN jin ko likhna hai
Tabeer ki soorat deni hai
Kuch log hain Ujray dil walay
JinhaiN apni mohobbat deni hai
Kuch phool haiN jin ko chun’nana hai
Or haar ki soorat deni hai
Kuch apni neend baqi hai
Jisay bantna hai logooN maiN
Un ko bhi to rahat deni hai
Aay umer -e- rawaaN!
Aahista chal

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:k:

:chai:

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thanks :slight_smile:
chai khtm nahi hoi abhi tk…?

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:dhimpak:

:chai:

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:) hazaroon khwahishain aisee k.....
nice thoughts

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v nice Sheal lakin maiN ahista nahi chal sakti k me birdy urti hia :p

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Very Nice :)

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oh :( chalo ap aisa kero k zara ahista uraa keri :p

Thanks :)

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thanks muncho and tum_bin

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ayy umr-e-rawaan!
Ahista chal..
kya baat hai!!!–magar kya umr-e-rawaannayapp ki baat mann li sheal:faizy:

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*Beautiful Choice Sheal :) *

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:D , haan kaam kafi hotay hain na MODs kay, tu ur ur kay hi ho suktay :D

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wah very nice :k:

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zabardast :k:

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umer-e-rawaaN aahistaa hee tau naheeN chalti :hinna:

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Beautiful Poem.. magar Shael.. mujhe lagta hai k aap se last line miss hogai.. lemme complete it for U..

Kuch khwaab haiN jin ko likhna hai
Tabeer ki soorat deni hai
Kuch log hain Ujray dil walay
JinhaiN apni mohobbat deni hai
Kuch phool haiN jin ko chun'nana hai
Or haar ki soorat deni hai
Kuch apni neend baqi hai
Jisay bantna hai logooN maiN
Un ko bhi to rahat deni hai
Aay umer -e- rawaaN!
Aahista chal
Abhi Khaasa Qarz Chukaana Hai..

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Thanks Ahmer for completing, main nay likhi to thi :p i think editing main delete ho gai :P or main nay dhiyan bhi nahi diya k kuch missing hai :p

thanks again :)

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Shukriya Mr. Anwaar Qureshi kay ap apnay khasay qeemti waqt main say kuch lamhay nikal ker hamaray thread ko ronaq bakhshnay aa gay. Thanks a lot :).

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buhat khoob :k:

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1 of my fav :)