aapnoon ki sada......

janae main kya likhtee hoon??? bus jo sochtee hoon likhe daetee hoon, criticism ki muntazir rahoon gi!!!

pardes main apnoon ki sada doondh rahee hoon
mudat sae wohi bazmae wafa doondh rahee hoon

kya paesh-e-nazar tha jo main niklee thee safar pae
ab sham dhalae soud-o-zayan dhoondh rahee hoon

gulrang tha musum tu sabhee saath khardae thae
pat-jhard hai tu pyaroon ka pata dhoondh rahee hoon

apno ka wohi saath,woh rishtoon ki mohabat,
al-garez woh gumgushta jehan doondh rahee hoon

es dasht main rahber hain faqat aap ki yaadain
milnae ki mujarib see dua dhoondh rahee hoon

(kuch arsa pehlae main nae aapnee amee ko kho diya, yeh sher unkee nazar hain)

toota bhi wohi najam jo thamae tha falak ko
es ramz main malek ki raza dhoondh rahee hoon

us shaaks kae janae sae andhair hooi nagree
har chand main ab us ki zaya dhoondh rahee hoon

wow mashaAllah yeh sab aapne khud likhaa… bahut zabardast hai jus beauutiful:k: ur one gifted person:k:

Re: aapnoon ki sada…

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very nice :k:
keep it up

niceeeeeeee:k:

Very Nice sis,Thanks for sharing your work, keep it up:)

Its nice :k:

:k::k::k:
Beautiful and keep it up :slight_smile:

Tum Kaheen Bewafa Na Hojana

Hijar ki bad-dua na hojana!!
Dekh lena saza na hojana...

Mor to beshumar aain gey!!!!
Thak na jana, Juda na hojana

Be irada safar peh nikley ho!!
Rastoo'n ki hawa na hojana..

Aik tumhi ko Khuddah say manga hai
Tum Kaheen Bewafa Na Hojana.......
Tum Kaheen Bewafa Na Hojana.......

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nice one adhorighazal n nice one arif saab

bohat khoob :k:

:frowning: very nice :k:

im sorry bout ur ammi…Allah(swt) unhain jannat naseeb farmaayen..ameen sum ameen

zabardast arif bhai, keep it up :k:

Yeh tu sahee manoon main ZARA NAWAZI hooi, bohat bohat sukria,
thanks, chand chera
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Sharara, thanks! achank aesa laga, jaesae main 7-8 saal ki bachee hoon aur aapna poora homework khatum kar kae check karwa rahee hoon!!!!!!

Thanks Arif, ab tu shaid rastoon ki hawa hi ho chuki hoon, kash aap pehlae WARN kar daetae!!!

and Xchornix, thanks a lot, dua main yaad rakhain tu inayat ho gee.