Re: Aanso
Nicely done with the subject:) .
As far as the poetic side is concerned 
, I have a suggestion:
Aansu
Ek tanha sa akela aansu
Sard palkon pe jama hai kab se
Jaane kis baat pe ye dheere se
Meri palkon pe umadd aaya tha
Baat bhi yaad nahi hai ab to
Gham to barson se mera monis o dam-saaz raha
Is ki khushbu se lahu mein garmi
Is ki garmi se ferozaa(n) rahe hangaam-e-khayaal
Jaane kaise wo chali aaee thi
Ik pal k liye
Ajnabi mere liye thi
Barri anjaani thi
Jaane kaisi thi wo be-naam khushi jo muh se
Chheen kar le k gaee thi
Mera gehvaara-e-nam
Mera barson ka asaasa
Mera sarmaaya-e-gham
Aur
Us waqt se main
Dhoond rahi hoon
Us ko.
Aap ko suggestion de kar kahin gustaakhi ka murtakib
to nahi ho raha main:( 