aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

Koyal · October 22, 2003, 11:45pm

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yuuN bhi terey tasav’vur sey hum ne keeye giley
waadoN ko teray yaad kar ke muskura deeye

waqt ke badaltey chehroN ko takti rahi umeed
aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshan rahey deeye

tu rasta bhatak bhatak gayaa dil maanta nahi
ke tujhey hifz they jo raastey wohi nahi miley

hawaaoN key haath jhoti koi tasalli hi bhej dey
bey-jaan waadoN ki shaakh pey koi tu gul khiley

mujh se qata-e-taa’aluq pe manaa liya tujhey
terey dil ko meri jaan kesey ye hosley huwey*

Daagh · October 22, 2003, 11:49pm

Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

bahot khoob koyal jee…it is always a pleasure reading your poems

thanks for sharing

AQ · October 22, 2003, 11:49pm

waadoN ko teray yaad kar ke muskura deeye

:)

ullujii · October 22, 2003, 11:50pm

Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

very nice

Guest7777 · October 23, 2003, 1:47am

:k:

WiseGuy · October 23, 2003, 1:59am

Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

yuuN bhi terey tasav’vur sey hum ne keeye giley
waadoN ko teray yaad kar ke muskura deeye

waqt ke badaltey chehroN ko takti rahi umeed
aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshan rahey deeye

tu rasta bhatak bhatak gayaa dil maanta nahi
ke tujhey hifz they jo raastey wohi nahi miley

hawaaoN key haath jhoti koi tasalli hi bhej dey
bey-jaan waadoN ki shaakh pey koi tu gul khiley

mujh se qata-e-taa’aluq pe manaa liya tujhey
terey dil ko meri jaan kesey ye hosley huwey*
[/QUOTE]

BOhat achi hai Koyal.
Thank you for sharing. :)

Azad · October 23, 2003, 5:46am

humm

SuraJ · October 23, 2003, 6:21am

bahut umda :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 23, 2003, 8:38am

beautiful :o

Azad · October 23, 2003, 8:42am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
beautiful :o
[/QUOTE]

Yeh laal rang kab mujhay chorray ga ......

Koyal · October 23, 2003, 10:43am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Yeh laal rang kab mujhay chorray ga ......
[/QUOTE]

jab ap is ki taraf dekhna chor do gaye :p

Amal · October 23, 2003, 12:33pm

Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

Achi ghazal hey Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing:)

Swera · October 23, 2003, 12:56pm

mujh se qata-e-taa’aluq pe manaa liya tujhey
terey dil ko meri jaan kesey ye hosley huwey

wah!

Koyal · October 24, 2003, 10:19am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
mujh se qata-e-taa’aluq pe manaa liya tujhey
terey dil ko meri jaan kesey ye hosley huwey

wah!
[/QUOTE]

thanks swera...kahan hoti hain ap :)

Pramod · October 24, 2003, 9:05pm

bahot hii achii ghazal hai koyal jii

Thanx for sharing it...

chand_chehra · October 24, 2003, 10:27pm

Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

very nice :k:

SuraJ · October 25, 2003, 2:27am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
beautiful :o
[/QUOTE]

:D

Jaan_Lewaa · October 25, 2003, 2:29am

bhut khoob:k:

Koyal · October 25, 2003, 2:38am

Re: Re: aaNkhoN meiN intizaar ke roshaN rahey deeye

thanks sallu g ..

Koyal · October 25, 2003, 2:40am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Pramod: *
bahot hii achii ghazal hai **koyal jii*

Thanx for sharing it...
[/QUOTE]

thanks Prem g kafi dino baad ana huwa ap ka sab theek hia na..:)