A GupShup’s member poetry…
Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
aankhon mian yeh jhutay aansoo suchay nahi lagtay
ishq hota jo meena say tu meray ilawa
tumhain koi bhi rishtay achay nahi lagtay…
A GupShup’s member poetry…
Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
aankhon mian yeh jhutay aansoo suchay nahi lagtay
ishq hota jo meena say tu meray ilawa
tumhain koi bhi rishtay achay nahi lagtay…
Nice :-)
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
nice sharing :)
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
aray baba ye meri poetry ahmi aap ne yaha likh di, wo bhi thori ghalat likhhi hai it like this,
ankho ko chalaknay se roka karo hamdam
ankho main jhutay aansu sachhay nahin lagtay,
hota jo ishq mujhse to mere ilawa
tumko koi bhi rishtay achhay nahin lagtay!
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
meena bajeeee ahmi ko koe kam beh tehk nehe ata ![]()
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
wow nice sharing ..
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jee aap tou mujhay sadyon say janti hain na…
aray baba ye meri poetry ahmi aap ne yaha likh di, wo bhi thori ghalat likhhi hai it like this, ankho ko chalaknay se roka karo hamdam ankho main jhutay aansu sachhay nahin lagtay, hota jo ishq mujhse to mere ilawa tumko koi bhi rishtay achhay nahin lagtay!
Sorry for mistake Meena g...
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
Thanks Koya, Shab & Drknt for liking...
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
Nice Sharing
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
Thanks Tere Naam...
Tau Aap theek kar do na
Yeah exactly..
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
Nice Attmpt!!
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
JannaT pakki baat hai k nice attempt hai
JannaT pakki baat hai k nice attempt hai
Ahoooo
Nicee:)
Ahoooo
Lagta to nahin par aap kehti ho tomaan leta hooN
Nicee:)
Nice kiya Ahmi yr Qat'a
Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
shukriya aap sab ka :) sooner i will be sharing ma more poetries here :)