Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

A GupShup’s member poetry…

Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam
aankhon mian yeh jhutay aansoo suchay nahi lagtay

ishq hota jo meena say tu meray ilawa
tumhain koi bhi rishtay achay nahi lagtay…

Nice :-)

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

nice sharing :)

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

aray baba ye meri poetry ahmi aap ne yaha likh di, wo bhi thori ghalat likhhi hai it like this,
ankho ko chalaknay se roka karo hamdam
ankho main jhutay aansu sachhay nahin lagtay,
hota jo ishq mujhse to mere ilawa
tumko koi bhi rishtay achhay nahin lagtay!

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

meena bajeeee ahmi ko koe kam beh tehk nehe ata :hehe:

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

wow nice sharing ..

MM ..listen ..Chup …:smilestar:

jee aap tou mujhay sadyon say janti hain na…

Sorry for mistake Meena g...

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

Thanks Koya, Shab & Drknt for liking...

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

Nice Sharing

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

Thanks Tere Naam...

Tau Aap theek kar do na

Yeah exactly..

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

Nice Attmpt!!

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

JannaT pakki baat hai k nice attempt hai

Ahoooo

Nicee:)

Lagta to nahin par aap kehti ho tomaan leta hooN

Nice kiya Ahmi yr Qat'a

Re: Aankhon ko chalaknay say roka karo hamdam

shukriya aap sab ka :) sooner i will be sharing ma more poetries here :)