~*~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~*~

[Aryaan]

Teri Aankhon Ki Udaasi
Karti Hai Udaas Mujhe
Teri Tanhaiyon Ke Khayaal Se
Dil Tanha Hai Mera
Jaagta Tu Hai
Thak Jaati Hain Aankhein Meri
Zakhm Jaltey Hain Tere
Dard Mujhe Hota Hai..

[bellacullen]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Jaagta Tu Hai
Thak Jaati Hain Aankhein Meri

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omg i love it

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Thanks Bella..

[bellacullen]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

did u write this one??

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Eham.. Aapko kya lagta hai?

[bellacullen]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

mmmm
honestly..........
i think yes

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Kisi hadh tak keh sakti hain aap..:)

[bellacullen]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

nhiiii
i wanna knw
plzzzzzzz

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Nope! it's not mine.. Ek unknown shayer hai usski hai..:)

[bellacullen]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

acha haii
as u say

[Aryaan]

acha haii as u say

:)

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

[nayab87]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Buhat acchi sharing hai..... Aryaan

[Dania]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

nice :k:

[Aryaan]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

Thanks Nayab & Dania..

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Nice poem and image :k:

[Shab-e-Hijar]

@Aryaan

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/Aryaans/Ashk-Se-Khaali-Rehna.gif

beautiful :k:

[system]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

simply awesome work ....

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: ~~Aankhon Ki Udaasi~~

the most powerful thing about your choice of poetry is its simplicity.
wo kehte hein na - sadgi mein bhi qayamat ki adaa hoti hei!
its a pleasure to read anything you post Aryan

[Aryaan]

Thank you so much Shab-e-Hijar, Gypsy & Jhanjharewali..