Aankhen sach bolti hai...

Daagh · August 9, 2003, 9:10am

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ret par likh ke meraa naam mitaya na karo
aankhen sach bolati hain pyaar chupaya na karo

log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain
sab ko haalaat ki rudaad sunaayaa na karo

ye zaroori nahin har shaKhs masihaa hi ho
pyaar ke zaKhm amaanat hain dikhaya na karo

shahar-e-ehasaas mein patthraav bahut hain ‘Mohsin’
dil ko shishe ke jharonkhon mein sajaya na karo
**

-Mohsin Naqvi

Amarbail1 · August 9, 2003, 9:30am

great …:k:

Daagh · August 9, 2003, 2:01pm

thanks amarbail :)

Mehfil · August 9, 2003, 2:53pm

log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain
sab ko haalaat ki rudaad sunaayaa na karo

bahut khoob!

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 9, 2003, 4:58pm

boht achay daagho uncle :)

Koyal · August 9, 2003, 7:03pm

kis ne ap ko ankhin dekhaiey jaldi batiey

btw nice one mohsin naqvi is ma fav poet…

Swera · August 9, 2003, 8:30pm

Wah wah!

log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain
sab ko haalaat ki rudaad sunaayaa na karo

Wah!!

Daagh · August 9, 2003, 8:47pm

many thanks Mehfil, HH and Swera

Daagh · August 9, 2003, 8:48pm

imaginations koyal jee just imaginations

nice to know you liked it…

yeah i like his work a lot…simple and subtle and upto the point

zidee · August 10, 2003, 3:42am

Re: Aankhen sach bolti hai...

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Originally posted by Daagh: *
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ye zaroori nahin har shaKhs masihaa hi ho
pyaar ke zaKhm amaanat hain dikhaya na karo
**
[/QUOTE]

beautiful
i particularly enjoyed this shair
thanks for sharing

cuteepie · August 10, 2003, 5:34am

beautiful:k:

K_Khan · August 10, 2003, 5:40am

nice one .. :KK: :D

Philanthrope · August 10, 2003, 7:56am

Lovely!

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 10, 2003, 10:15pm

niceeee:k:

Daagh · August 10, 2003, 10:24pm

many thanks all :)