Yeh aankhein sojati hain,
per yeh ansoo nahi sotey,
ajj bhi hum khuaab tere dekh ker,
neend mein hain rotey.
How is it? its rare for me to come up with good ones :p
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*Originally posted by Chaand: *
How is it? its rare for me to come up with good ones :p
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Its good :-)
Bas... agar Mujhko iss maiN keeRay nikalnay ki Ijaazat ho tou...
Arz Kia hay .... gala saaf karing
**Aankh tou so jati hay
Par ashk ye ruktay naheeN
Neend maiN rotay haiN ab bhi
Teray sapnay dekh kar **
Adab Arz :D
Agar Joota marna ho tou Pehlay hi bata do... maiN UNDO kardoonga :D
Aik shair
Ansowoo nay ghamow say gahbra kar
palkon say gir kar khudkushee kar li:teary3: 
Chand ji shair tu acha hai lekin thori islah ki zarorat hai i m not really good at it lekin likhney key sath sath islah bhi kar hi lete hainh, tu i think key shair ku agar app aisey likhein lafz sarey apkey hainh bas kuch diff tarekey sey ikhata keya hai GS app ki attempt bhi achi hai :)
terey khawab dhiek kar aj bhi neend mei rote hainh hum
ankhien souj jati hainh qatra qatra ansyuon key sang
Thanks! GS and Nazi!
i'll fix it up
:k: :k: :k:
:k:
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