ruKhsat hua to aankh milaa kar nahiiN gayaa
vo kyun gayaa hai ye bhii bataa kar nahiiN gayaa
vo yuun gayaa ke baad-e-sabaa yaad aa gayii
ehsaas tak bhii hamko dilaa kar nahiiN gayaa
yuun lag rahaa hai jaise abhii latT aayegaa
jaate hu’e chiraaGh bujhaa kar nahiiN gayaa
bas ek lakeer kheNch gayaa darmiyaan meN
deevaar raaste meN banaa kar nahiiN gayaa
shaayed vo mil hii jaaye magar justujuu hai shart
vo apne naqsh-e-paa mitaa kar nahiiN gayaa
ghar mein hai aaj tak vohii Khushbuu basii hu’ii
lagtaa hai yuuN ke jaise vo aa kar nahiiN gayaa
tab tak to phuul jaisii hii taazaa thii uskii yaad
jab tak vo pattiiyoN ko judaa kar nahiiN gayaa
rahne diyaa na usne kisii kaam kaa mujhe
aur Khaak meN bhii mujhko milaa kar nahiiN gayaa
vaisii hii betalab hai abhii merii zindagii
vo Khaar-o-Khas meN aag lagaa kar nahiiN gayaa
“Shehzad” ye gilaa hii rahaa uskii yaad se
jaate hu’e vo ko’ii gilaa kar nahiiN gayaa
Shehzad Ahmed
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thank u thank u everyone for all the comments :D!
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Very nice!
main sadkey jaon ap ke selection par
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zabardast. Bohot khoob.
Raat k is waqt i was not sure k mujhe kuch aesa parhne ko milega, lkn hats off to u.
Thanx alot for sharing.
Re: aankh mila kar nahi gaya
Very nice!
main sadkey jaon ap ke selection par
haye haye ! ;)
Re: aankh mila kar nahi gaya
zabardast. Bohot khoob.
Raat k is waqt i was not sure k mujhe kuch aesa parhne ko milega, lkn hats off to u.
Thanx alot for sharing.
mehrbani ji and where have u been Sinlner?? aap ko bahot dino baad dekheya meine
SJ
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bas ek lakeer kheNch gayaa darmiyaan meN
deevaar raaste meN banaa kar nahiiN gayaa
shaayed vo mil hii jaaye magar justujuu hai shart
vo apne naqsh-e-paa mitaa kar nahiiN gayaa
rahne diyaa na usne kisii kaam kaa mujhe
aur Khaak meN bhii mujhko milaa kar nahiiN gayaa
Shehzad Ahmed
amazing :)
Re: aankh mila kar nahi gaya
chori karne wale aankhen kab mila kar jate hein. very nice.
Aqls
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bohat zabardast
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Gud
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thank you sonia and aqal-lass and taliba and dreamy :)
its a nice poem indeed.
EEMAAN
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Bohat khoob..
Re: aankh mila kar nahi gaya
yehi pe hota ho. bas kaam mein masroof tha is lie ziada ana nai huwa.