aakhri feryaad

bhatka_musafir · April 30, 2003, 10:24pm

aee meray sajun kya jaante hou tum
kaisay tera bina taraptey hain hum

sawan kou bhi rehta shikwa hai humse
sehra ki manind kyon pyaasey hain hum

chand akser naraz humse raha kerta hai
jou hussan tera bayan kertey hain hum

teri dustak ka weham houta hai hum kou
jou zara deer kou aankh lagatey hain hum

ger mil jae khaber teri kabhi bhi
eid ka din pher manatey hain hum

mout baithee mudat say choukath pey apni
naan aatey hou tum naan murtey hain hum

buss aik baar aajao soorat apni dikha jao
yehi aakhri feryaad tumse kertey hain hum

poet = me

Twister · May 1, 2003, 2:35am

Wah bhai bada acha likhtey ho
Very Nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 1, 2003, 4:41pm

bohat khoooooooooooob :k:

system · May 1, 2003, 5:46pm

niceeee :k::k:

Galaxy · May 1, 2003, 6:43pm

aap kiyun nahi likhtey ho

chand_chehra · May 1, 2003, 8:09pm

keep it up musafir :)

bhatka_musafir · May 1, 2003, 8:17pm

Twister , HeArT HaCKeR, *** Vivacious ***

buhat buhat nawazish.

bhatka_musafir · May 1, 2003, 8:19pm

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
keep it up musafir :)
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hamein murwa kay hi dum lou gay :D

Nazam · May 2, 2003, 10:52am

Nice one Musafir kooshish ka safur jare rakhen

bhatka_musafir · May 2, 2003, 5:38pm

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*Originally posted by Nazam: *
Nice one Musafir kooshish ka safur jare rakhen
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umeed hai kisi din zaroor acha sheir kahoun gaa :D