aaj

umeed24 · July 26, 2003, 5:07pm

main aaj likhna chati hoon
un bhooli bisri yadoon ko
tum se ki sari baton ko
tumharai sath guzri sub sa’ato’n ko
woh bin badal barsaton ko
aur
kuch ankahe afsano’n ko
main aaj likhna chati hoon
aur
amar karlaina chati hoon

by umeed

Dilsay · July 26, 2003, 6:04pm

Very nice

system · July 26, 2003, 7:06pm

beautiful :k:

arfin99 · July 27, 2003, 3:20pm

Simply Beautifulll

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 27, 2003, 3:54pm

nice...

umeed24 · July 27, 2003, 5:02pm

thx every one for reading my peoms and adding words of encouragement:flower2:

PaGaL_dEwAnA · July 27, 2003, 6:46pm

:k:

SuraJ · July 28, 2003, 4:04am

bahut hi Alla keep it up :)

Zakhmi_Umar · July 28, 2003, 5:27am

nice one :k: thanx for sharing

umeed24 · July 28, 2003, 8:47am

thx zakhmi umar, suraJ, pagal dewana and others