aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye

chand_chehra · April 5, 2002, 8:29pm

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faasale aise bhii ho.nge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baiThaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa

vo ki Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mai.n use mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa

raat bhar us kii hii aahaT kaan me.n aatii rahii
jhaa.Nk kar dekhaa galii me.n ko_ii bhii aayaa na thaa

aks to maujuud the par aks tanahaa_ii ke the
aa_iinaa to thaa magar us me.n teraa cheharaa na thaa

aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye
aaj mai.n royaa to mere saath vo royaa na thaa

ye sabhii viiraaniyaa.N us ke judaa hone se thii.n
aa.Nkh dhu.Ndhalaa_ii hu_ii thii shahar dhu.Ndhalaayaa na thaa

yaad karake aur bhii takaliif hotii thii “Adeem”
bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab ko_ii bhii chaaraa na thaa

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Ek_Shairah · April 5, 2002, 8:37pm

Very nice

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Thanx for sharing

chand_chehra · April 5, 2002, 8:46pm

u welcome shaira ge but why u crying

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

NikamiJano · April 5, 2002, 9:33pm

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thanks 4 sharing

hmmm aur ap k sher kahan?

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

chand_chehra · April 5, 2002, 10:24pm

jano ge shair bhi arahay thora wait karay na

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and bery belcome

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Mahee · April 6, 2002, 1:00am

boht khobsuret ghazal hai

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. thanks for sharing

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

Muddi · April 6, 2002, 1:57am

Khubsorat...............wow

Meiji

chand_chehra · April 7, 2002, 7:48am

thankz for liking

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

chand_chehra · April 7, 2002, 7:50am

ahemmmmmmmm kon

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

speed_master · April 7, 2002, 2:06pm

Nice....

chand_chehra · April 7, 2002, 8:41pm

thankz

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

anar_kali · April 7, 2002, 8:49pm

it's beautiful

Pramod · April 8, 2002, 3:24am

aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye
aaj mai.n royaa to mere saath vo royaa na thaa

Great Chand ji. Thanks for sharing....

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

juMurA · April 8, 2002, 5:40am

Bohat- KhooB

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chand_chehra · April 8, 2002, 10:36pm

Many thankz anarkali pramod and jumura ge

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Maheen2002 · April 9, 2002, 11:50am

Very nice...

~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~