Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Khwaab aankhoon ko jagaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Dil mein hulchul si machaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Maana hum se tu koi baat banae na bane
Aap hi baat banaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Chor kar jane ki ye reet puraani hai bahut
Aap aa kar nahee jaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain
Hum ho khush ho ke dikhaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Wada-e-wasl tu dastoor puraana thehra
Log is ko jo nibhaate tu koi baat bhi thee

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Re: Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain

kia hi baat hai …:k:
nice

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Re: Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain

tumhare selection of poetry tareef ke kabel hai:k::k:
thanks for sharing:~)

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wow
gud one

-"A sad thing in life is when you meet someone who means a lot to you,only to find out in the end that it was never meant to be and you just have to let go. "

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Re: Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Bhooli Bisri: *

Khwaab aankhoon ko jagaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Dil mein hulchul si machaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Maana hum se tu koi baat banae na bane
Aap hi baat banaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Chor kar jane ki ye reet puraani hai bahut
Aap aa kar nahee jaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain
Hum ho khush ho ke dikhaate tu koi baat bhi thee
Wada-e-wasl tu dastoor puraana thehra
Log is ko jo nibhaate tu koi baat bhi thee
[/QUOTE]

dil key haaton to sab majbur hein , zaban kiya hey,
magar is pey aap bethatey pehrey, to koi baat bhi thi
darya paar to titanic mein bhi jasakti thi sassi,
gahra kiya hey, toot ta jo na gar, to koi baat bhi thi.

aur agar mein hi mun band rakhta to bohot hi achii baat hoti :)
very good attempt. beautiful

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Buhat Khoob:k:

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Nice....

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Re: Aaj toota hai yaqeen, bheeg gaeen hain palkain

Nice ghazal Bhooli Bisri:k:…thanx for sharing.