Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

coolpeepa June 21, 2005, 3:04pm 1

manzilein bhe uss ke theen, rasta bhe uss ka tha

ik main akela tha, kafla bhe uss ka tha

saath sath chalne ke, soch bhe uss ke thee

phir rasta badalne ka, faisla bhe uss ka thaa

aaj kion akela hoon, dil sawal karta hay

loog tou uss ke thaay, kia khuda bhe uss ka tha ?

HeArT_HaCKeR June 21, 2005, 4:13pm 2

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay...

Beautiful!!!

Rameesha June 21, 2005, 6:44pm 3

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay…

awww sighz

thanks for sharing CP :k:

If You Were a CARTOON!!

system June 21, 2005, 8:54pm 4

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay…

nice :k:

Koyal June 21, 2005, 9:26pm 5

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay…

aaj kion akela hoon, dil sawal karta hay
loog tou uss ke thaay, kia khuda bhe uss ka tha ?
:k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 22, 2005, 4:43am 6

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay…

Very Nice.. :k:

shoaib_akhter June 22, 2005, 1:48pm 7

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay…

wow.. bohat khob :k:

Dilsay June 22, 2005, 2:36pm 8

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay...

What a choice khush rahoo

reet June 23, 2005, 11:57am 9

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay...

loog tou uss ke thaay, kia khuda bhe uss ka tha ?

bahot khoob.....thnx 4 sharing.....

coolpeepa June 26, 2005, 10:08pm 10

Re: Aaj kion akela hoon dil sawal karta hay...

thnx evrybody for liking it...