Aaj ki baarish kuch apni si lagi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ZaA_A_ma August 17, 2006, 4:52pm 1

I made this one myself.. hope u ppl like it.. was a bit scared to post it, but some ppl liked it .. so i like to share with you this Shair, enjoy and tell me what u think 'bout it , if i made any mistakes plz tell me:

Aaj ki baarish kuch apni si lagi
Aisa laga jaise,
Jitne aansoon meine tumhare liye bahae,
khul ke aasman se neeche aa tapke ..
Jaise..
Jitni mohabbat mujhe tumse thi
iss baarish ki harr boond ne yeh batlaya
Jaise..
Aankein band karke
koi apna nazzar aya
Jaise ..
Aankhein khol kar
Mujhe milli meri purani zindagi
Jiss mein Tum the aur Mein
aur .. Koi nahin
Iss tarha hi..
Aaj ki baarish kuch apni si lagi ..

Zaima…

Koyal August 17, 2006, 9:01pm 2

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nice Zaima kia ap kahin air kisi board pe b likhti lagta hia pahlay b parhi hia kahin :)

HeArT_HaCKeR August 18, 2006, 11:47am 3

Re: Aaj ki baarish kuch apni si lagi

Nice one ! keep it up.

ZaA_A_ma August 18, 2006, 12:25pm 4

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Thnx all.. yes i posted it first in prince charming (i think) , ..phir kuch logon ko pasand ayi, to phir meine apni thread banadi ..

Muslim_girl_1 August 18, 2006, 6:38pm 5

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bohat hi piyaari nazm hai…beautiful…:k:

goodnews August 19, 2006, 12:49am 6

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**Wah Zaima tum tu chupi rustam niklin itni Zabrdast shairi wah **
ZZ =Zaima+Zabardast

_IkLarki August 19, 2006, 3:59am 7

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z kia kehte ho sachmere ankh me b pani aagya

The Random Thread

ZaA_A_ma August 19, 2006, 3:36pm 8

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thnx Goodnews, eklarki

Sannan August 21, 2006, 4:28am 9

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wah wah zaima g ...buhat sadgi kay sath byan kar dia aap nay buhat kuch ......

ZaA_A_ma August 27, 2006, 3:50pm 10

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jee

Prince_Ali August 31, 2006, 8:50am 11

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Very nice :k:

ZaA_A_ma August 31, 2006, 9:22am 12

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Shukriya

_IkLarki September 5, 2006, 10:36pm 13

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kiya goud news k me sudhar gai
itne nahi har bure insan ko sudharne k timee chahiye

ZaA_A_ma September 9, 2006, 1:32pm 14

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Huh sorry jee ki matlab mein samjhi nahin jee

cooking tip!

nakhan September 11, 2006, 6:14am 15

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very Gud Zaima...

ZaA_A_ma September 11, 2006, 1:40pm 16

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Thnkz

_IkLarki September 11, 2006, 9:10pm 17

Re: Aaj ki baarish kuch apni si lagi

kiya goud news
yeh k me sudhar gai?
itne nahi har bure insan ko sudharne k timee chahiye
yeh kaha tha samjhe:bummer: