Ali_2
1
badalon kay siya ghoonghat mein
chand simta hua sa aaya hai
zindgii kay safar mein barson baad
waqt nay phir humien milaya hai
too bhi gum-sum hai aur mein bhi chup
jaisay khamoshiyon ka pehra ho
aansoun mein pighal rhay hain dil
zarb kaarii hai zakham gehra hai
yon hawa cheekhtii hai pairron mein
jaisay raqsaa’n khien balayien hain
aaj har shey mein ajnabiyet hai
kitni badlii hoii fizaaien hain
yeh haqeeqat hai khush-naseeb hon main
go tujhay phir say paa liya khho kar
haan! magar yeh bhi haqeeqat hai
too milli bhi to ghair kii ho kar
main bhi ab wo nahien jo pehlay tha
too bhi badlii hoii haqeeqat hai
is mulaqaat say bhii kya haasil
too kisi aur kii amanat hai
go nahien hosla judaii ka
ab yaqeenan yeh zehar pee loon ga
aaj tak haal e dil sunaya hai
aaj kay baad hont sii loon ga
shab kii in sa’aton mein jaan e aziz
aaj yeh ehad e aatsheen hoga
do dharaktay hoye dilon ka milaap
aaj kay baad phir nahien hoga
Koyal
2
Re: ~~Aaj ke Baad~~
long but v nice Ali
too bhi gum-sum hai aur mein bhi chup
jaisay khamoshiyon ka pehra ho
aansoun mein pighal rhay hain dil
zarb kaarii hai zakham gehra hai
yon hawa cheekhtii hai pairron mein
jaisay raqsaa'n khien balayien hain
aaj har shey mein ajnabiyet hai
kitni badlii hoii fizaaien hain
Ali_2
3
Re: ~~Aaj ke Baad~~
long but v nice Ali
too bhi gum-sum hai aur mein bhi chup
jaisay khamoshiyon ka pehra ho
aansoun mein pighal rhay hain dil
zarb kaarii hai zakham gehra hai
yon hawa cheekhtii hai pairron mein
jaisay raqsaa'n khien balayien hain
aaj har shey mein ajnabiyet hai
kitni badlii hoii fizaaien hain
thanks :)
Koyal
4
Re: Aaj ke Baad
hmmmm Ali ap janay pehchanay lagtey ho
intro do jaldi se 
Koyal
6
Re: ~~Aaj ke Baad~~
hmmm badam kha k yaad karaN :D
milay tu hum kahiN nahi per pa kahaN se ho
muncho
7
Re: ~~Aaj ke Baad~~
[quote="Koyal"]
long but v nice Ali
barsoon k kissay taweel tau hotay na g:)
nazam main wohee rawaatee kushmakush hay, malaal-bhara wasul aur aik kamzoor irada bhoolnay ka.
zindgii kay safar mein barson baad
waqt nay phir humien milaya hai
aaj yeh ehad e aatsheen hoga
do dharaktay hoye dilon ka milaap
aaj kay baad phir nahien hoga
dil-chusp haqeeqat ye hay k waqt milata hay aur minay waalay iraada kartay aur tortay rah jaatay
PS: only sharing my thoughts/observations
Ali_2
8
Re: ~~Aaj ke Baad~~
hmmm badam kha k yaad karaN :D
milay tu hum kahiN nahi per pa kahaN se ho
aaj kal ke badaamon main bhi asar nahin hai
kuch nahin yaad ane wala :D
Koyal
9
Re: Aaj ke Baad
a jaiey gha pista khaao aur jaldi batao ap 
Ali_2
10
Re: Aaj ke Baad
aap kahin hakeem shakeem to nahin
ilaaj pe ilaaj bata rahin hain 
Neem hakeem khatra-e-jaan
Koyal
11
Re: Aaj ke Baad
ye ilaaj nahi hai 
aur ap taltey ja rahya…kahin ap diplomat tu nahi haiN 