Aaj jo...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ankhon main aaj jo saroor hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Ankhon main aaj jo pyaar hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Baaton main aaj jo ashq hai,
Woh suna nahin kabhi
Hoton main aaj jo garmi hai,
Woh chhui nahin kabhi
Surkh gulabon ki aaj jo mehak hai,
Woh soonghi nahin kabhi

Aaj kay din hum dekh bhi rahay hain,
Sun bhi rahay hain,
Chhoo bhi rahay hain
Par zul-o-sitam aaj hum nay
Mehsoos kiya pehli baar
Kyon kay jin kay liyay yeh ehsasaat hain,
Hum woh khush kismat nahin.

It kinda fell apart in the end, I know…

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Re: Aaj jo...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Khumar: *
Ankhon main aaj jo saroor hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Ankhon main aaj jo pyaar hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Baaton main aaj jo ashq hai,
Woh suna nahin kabhi
Hoton main aaj jo garmi hai,
Woh chhui nahin kabhi
Surkh gulabon ki aaj jo mehak hai,
Woh soonghi nahin kabhi

Aaj kay din hum dekh bhi rahay hain,
Sun bhi rahay hain,
Chhoo bhi rahay hain
Par zul-o-sitam aaj hum nay
Mehsoos kiya pehli baar
Kyon kay jin kay liyay yeh ehsasaat hain,
Hum woh khush kismat nahin.

It kinda fell apart in the end, I know...
[/QUOTE]

Wah Wah Jee Kiya BaaT Hai Aap Ki :) Bohat Khoob Well Done And Thx 4 Sharing :)

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hummm

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Re: Re: Aaj jo...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mrs_Mazhar: *

Wah Wah Jee Kiya BaaT Hai Aap Ki :) Bohat Khoob Well Done And Thx 4 Sharing :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks!!! i didn't think any one would like it! thanks again!

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:konfused: so you didn’t like it? or was it just a standard placed humm? well anyways, thans for even commenting on it! :smiley:

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acha likhtee hain

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thankyou :blush:

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Re: Aaj jo...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Khumar: *
Ankhon main aaj jo saroor hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Ankhon main aaj jo pyaar hai,
Woh dekha nahin kabhi
Baaton main aaj jo ashq hai,
Woh suna nahin kabhi
Hoton main aaj jo garmi hai,
Woh chhui nahin kabhi
Surkh gulabon ki aaj jo mehak hai,
Woh soonghi nahin kabhi

Aaj kay din hum dekh bhi rahay hain,
Sun bhi rahay hain,
Chhoo bhi rahay hain
Par zul-o-sitam aaj hum nay
Mehsoos kiya pehli baar
Kyon kay jin kay liyay yeh ehsasaat hain,
Hum woh khush kismat nahin.

It kinda fell apart in the end, I know...
[/QUOTE]

Ache Kosish hay!
Tora wazan nahi hay ! lakin Good Try
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