aaj hai apnii bulandii par tujhe kitnaa gurur

Pramod · May 11, 2004, 10:11pm

Bahot dino ke baad bazm mein haazir hua hooN..bahot achha lag raha hai…Chaliye apnii eik puraani ghazal se hii sahii magar aagaaz to ho…

Ye dil hi na mere dard se jab aashnaaN nikla
Kya huaa ai dost jo tu bhii bewafaa nikla

chala gaya wo chhoD ke sadiyoN ki raah meiN
lamhoN ke saath yaadoN ka par silsilah nikla

aaj tashnakaam hooN tere bazm meiN saaqee
meri hii pyaas se tha kabhee ye maikada nikla

Dil hii to toDa tha kisi ne aie mere hakeem
KyoNkar hua ke dard mera ye la-dava nikla

aaj hai apnii bulandii par tujhe kitnaa gurur
esii zameeN se yaad rakh, hai aasmaaN nikla

By Pramod

chand_chehra · May 11, 2004, 11:24pm

very nice :k: …it’s so nice to see you around

pagaal · May 12, 2004, 5:29am

very nice

system · May 12, 2004, 2:02pm

Re: aaj hai apnii bulandii par tujhe kitnaa gurur

Nice…

Black_Mamba · May 12, 2004, 2:08pm

:k: Have always liked your poetry bro.

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 12, 2004, 7:10pm

first of all welcome back Pramod bhaiyya

where have u been? really missed u and ur posts ..

aur jub ye ap ne pehlii dafa post ki thee us waQt hee hum ne apne pas note ker lii but i didnt know k its ur own ghazal :k:..

thanks for sharing again..

Pramod · May 13, 2004, 2:01am

Ghazal Pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye aap saboN ka bahot bahot shukriya...

Chand jii, pagaal,KhamoshNigahein,Black Mamba,HeArT HaCKeR sahiba

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2004, 3:05am

beautiful:k: :k:

Ps: WElcome back.. … nice to see u here:-)

Pramod · May 14, 2004, 3:04pm

Thanks a lot ** gkk **

Koyal · May 15, 2004, 4:06pm

chala gaya wo chhoD ke sadiyoN ki raah meiN
lamhoN ke saath yaadoN ka par silsilah nikla

v nice thanks 4 sharing...hope ap share kartey raho gaye but koyal ka idher ana kam he hota jab post karo koyal ko bata dayna..:)

Amarbail · May 15, 2004, 8:10pm

No doubt, its a masterpiece …:k:
Thanks for sharing and my apologize for visiting the thread so late
Hope to see your work without any break … God bless you !

Pramod · May 16, 2004, 8:31pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *
chala gaya wo chhoD ke sadiyoN ki raah meiN
lamhoN ke saath yaadoN ka par silsilah nikla

v nice thanks 4 sharing...hope ap share kartey raho gaye but koyal ka idher ana kam he hota jab post karo koyal ko bata dayna..:)
[/QUOTE]

sher pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye shukriya ** Koyal **..
aisii bhii kya naarazagii es section se..kabhii kabhii dekh liye kijiye..hamaari yuN hii honslaa afzaii hoti rahegii....

Pramod · May 16, 2004, 8:31pm

Bahot bahot shukriya ** Arif Bhai..**

Daagh · May 17, 2004, 10:04am

bahot khoob Pramod…wonderful work

Pramod · May 17, 2004, 7:43pm

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ** Daagh **

koiDost · May 19, 2004, 3:57pm

Bohat Khoob Pramod :)

Pramod · May 20, 2004, 2:36pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by koiDost: *
Bohat Khoob Pramod :)
[/QUOTE]

Thanks for appriciating my work, ** Dost **

ASA · May 21, 2004, 10:15am

hello bhiyaa … hope u will be fine… hunnnnn
ye itna arsa kahaN ghaib rahay… ?

aaj hai apnii bulandii par tujhe kitnaa gurur

bouhat khoob… :k:

Pramod · May 24, 2004, 9:00pm

** ASA **,

bas yuN hii kuchh apni pareshaanioN meiN uljha hua tha...lekin ab aata rahoonga forum pe..bahot achha lagta hai ye sun kar ke aap log mujhe yaad rakhte ho....

ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaii ke liye bahot bahot shukriya..........

Arvind · June 18, 2004, 3:03pm

Acchi gazalen likhna yeh ek hunar hain ki jo aap ke paas bahot hain Pramod bhai.