AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

Aaina Hoon Main Meray Saamne Aakar Dekho
Khud Nazar Aaogye Jo Aankh Mila Ker Dekho

Mere Gham Mai Mari Takdeer Nazar Aati Hai
Dugmagaaoge Mera Dard Utha Ker Dekho

Youn Tu Aasaan Nazar Aata Hai Manzil Ka Safar
Kitna Mushquil Hai Meri Raaha Se Jaaker Dekho

Bazam Ka Meri Charagaan Hai Nazar Ka Dhoka
Kin Andheroon Mai Bhatakta Hoon Main Aaker Dekho

Dil Tumhara Hai Main Ye Jaan Bhi Dedoon Tum Per
Bas Mera Saath Zara Dil Se Nibha Ker Dekho

Mout Barhaq Hai Mager Tum Se Waada Hai Mera
Laut Aaoungi Tum Ikbaar Bula Ker Dekho

MEHWISH AFSAR

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

very nice :k:

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

Last sheir meiN mar k loTney ki baat kar rahi heiN ya ?

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

Ghazal is very nice..

magar aik baat bataeay.. Mehwish is a boy or a girl?

last sher.. laut Aaung**A **:confused:

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM...
THANK YOU SO MUCH....

TAKE CARE...
MEHWISH AFSAR

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

kis ko salam aur thanks,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Dear
iam am new to this site but i really liek your poem and it really touch the hearths that are involved in love .

Thanks

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

nice ghazal but as far as i remember i read it somewhere else with someone else's name
did u write this ghazal?

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ZABARDAST

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awesome

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

awesome....

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

nice sharin
ap to bohat he acha likhte hayn
ye kis year may likhe the ap ne ?

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Beautiful sharing...

Dil Tumhara Hai Main Ye Jaan Bhi Dedoon Tum Per
Bas Mera Saath Zara Dil Se Nibha Ker Dekho

even i think i have read it somewhere.....and i am damn sure that its not urz

**its is becoz yeh ghazal kisi larkay ne likhe hoi hai … and i hav read it long back **


this is just not herz

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

^ chalo shukar hai koi tu agree kar raha hai :)

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

Ab ous bechari nay share kar he di hai tou kyun pichay par gaye ho ous kay saaray. Just read it out and have enjoy reading buddies.

cent per cent :cool:




*baat pechay parnay ke nahi hay *


jhoot nahi bolna chaeay wo bhe itne chote baat k liay **
**she could hav posted it in Intekhaab section agar share kerna itna he zaroori tha to ..

Re: AAINA HOON MAIN MERAY SAAMNE AAKAR DEKHO

^
completely agree with u :)