Wo aik aah jo nikli thi meray dil se kabhi
Wo kaheen raah bhaTakti hay apni manzil ki
Asar karegi jo puhnchaigi apni manzil tak
bas iss umeed pe jeeta hooN sangi dunya maiN
bas iss umeed pe jeeta hooN sangi dunya maiN
(Golden Scorpion)
humm bhala scropion ko kon dank mar sakti hay … 
:k: bouhat khoob…
LADY SCORPION 
Tnx Sweeeto 
mujy samj he nahi ayee 
pir bhi wawawawa :halo:
thought achi hey though kuch hard se hey. :k:
Samajh naheeN ayi tou.. tashreeh kar ke paRH lo na 
Tnx 
Now DEFINE HARD
So.. I could be careful next time
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*Originally posted by Golden_Scorpion: *
Tnx :)
Now DEFINE HARD :D
So.. I could be careful next time :)
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'aah' usualy takleef ka izhaar hey ju kabhi kabhi bad-dua key saath mashroot hota hey. aur ager ess context mein likha hay tu aaap ki aah jab manzil per puhnchey gi tu aaap key mehboob key lye shayed achi baat na ho. aur mehboob ka burra tu kissi bhi haal mein nahien soocha ja sakta na. :)
ess liye kha tha key hard sa theme hey.
yeh poem thee 
Ps:sorry :halo:
lol… 
asha jee :)
Tnx…
But.. here… MANZIL is Mehboob itself… Dil ki aah Mehboob tak puhunchegi tou… Asar karegi… this is the UMMEED here
Tnx alot… 
Jee naheeeN
Ye Poem ki Choti Behin thi…
:)
baat main damm hai bichoo bhai :k:
bohat achay
nice:k:
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