~*~ Aaghaaz yun huwa thaa ~*~

*Aghaaz yun huwa thaa

Us ne gulaab bheja

Mein ne kitaab kholi

Aur us mein rakh diya woh

Sab se issay chupaaya

Anjaam yeh huwa hai

Kuch khushk patteyaan hain

Thori si hai mehak bhi

Bas aur kuch nahe hai …*

<Fakhira Batool>

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Zabardast sharing :k:

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Bohat Khoob** Arif**..:k:

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BAUT UMDA SHARING

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very nice

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Thank you for liking friends ...

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bahot umda bhai jawab nahi ...poetry froum per tu ap hi ap chaahey ho..

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Bahut shukriya aap ki muhabbat ka ... Gard umooman chahee hi raha karti hai ...

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aray nahi sahab aisi baat tu na karain ap jaisay logon ki badolat ye forum main ronak hai ap logon ki posting perh kar hum jaisey log apna dard apna ghum bhool jatey hain thori deer zindagi ki muskorahton main khojatey hain yonh samjh lijye tanhaiye ka sathi hai ye computer ...

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Poetry forum ke char chand tau aap log hain in reality jo apni khoobsurat contribution and active participation se is forum ko mazeed khoobsurat bana dete hain ... Im glad that poetry section is having so many active participants now a days ... :)

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bhai sahab hum nay ab tak poetry main koi contribution nahin kiya siwae pasand or tareef k ....

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Chalain phir intezaar kis ka hai, Im looking forward to read your contributions ... :)

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nahin bhai koshish karonga ....per dekhtey hain