This post is dedicated to all the members like **Amjad Bhai, NikamiJano, **and Gul-e-Tasbeeh who quit Gupshup siding with me. Also to those who have been actively seeking my return, like HeArT HaCKeR and many others.
Aaghaaz likhooN to kesey likhooN, anjaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
meiN aek kaaghaz pe haal dil ka tamaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
na-jaaney qismat ke band saheefoN meiN kon kis ko ataa huwa hey
meiN apni khahish ke kaaghzoN par tera naam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
falak ke aaNgan meiN chupey huwey heiN baadloN ke shareer tukrey
meiN hawaa ki takhti pe chaahatoN ka salam likhoN to kesey likhooN!
har aek mefil meiN apney dhang sey samajh raha hey ishaarey merey
meiN nazar sey apni mohabbatoN ka peghaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
khizaaN ka mosam ruka huwaa hey merey tasavvur ke gulshanoN par
tujhey khusbuoN meiN racha-basa ke payaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
jo teri nigaahoN ke tamaam rangoN ko bayaaN ka pyara libaas bakhshey
meiN banam-e-hum’dam dhanak ke jesa kalaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
First of all..WELCOME BACK ** Amal *.
ye bazm aisii khubsurat ghazaloN se bahot dino tak mahroom rahii hai...
Thanks for coming....Though I didn't know the reason for your exit until the post was brought back by * HH **..but I had a hope..you will be back....Welcome back once again.....
Now..es khubsuart ghazal pe meri taraf se dehroN daad kubul karo...and post few more yaar..it past a long to read someting of your pen...
bohat achi gazhal hey. all I can say is that poetry forum is getting back its life again. I am so happy Amal :-)
and yaaar there are few who did not appear in ur thread but did miss you and felt the every bit of pain, prayed for your health and hoped you come back.
please dedicate your gazhal to them as well may be to a minor extent :)
and keep posting. my comming bday is going to be the luckiest one. :-)
arraaaayyyyyyyyy… Mae ne ap ki ye thread dekhii hii nahi
~Welcome Back Amal~
Beautiful ghazal as always.. :k:… specially this shair is just gr88888 ..
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na-jaaney qismat ke band saheefoN meiN kon kis ko ataa huwa hey
meiN apni khahish ke kaaghzoN par tera naam likhooN to kesey likhooN!* :k:…
aadaab,
humne aapki ghazal paDhi........taarif ke liye humein lafz nahin mil rahe hain.aap ke khayaal bahut hii umdaa hain aur aap unhe bahut hii khoobsurat andaaz mein bayaan kiya hai.
Amal jaab say aap gaya hoo mainay behi likhan choor diya aap nahi they na koyoon corrections karta baas ya he baat hai... aaj aap ko dekh kar acha laga...
