Aagahee!

apna to kaha sub nay hee
apna banaya kisi nay nahi

raahooN ka pata to sub nay daya
banay jo hum-safar koi aisa nahi

kero derd ki dawa sub nay kaha
maseeha magar koi bana he nahi

jub tuk daytay rahay Log miltay rahay
maanga jub sahara koi aya nahi

marnay per ajj rootay hain yeh log
jeenay ka haq jinhoN nay diya nahi

yeh kaysee Aagahe ajj tujh ko milee
phir Dar-e-dil waa hoa he nahi

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it captured some sad facts of life.

v. good poem.

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nice :k:

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I had read this beautiful poem on Nov 29th when u had posted it.... wanted to comment but thought to PM you first about few things :P which I think is my duty to tell you :-D .... wait for my PM now snooty

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Dusi & sunny > thanx : )

Anwar qureshi > main yeh poem pehlay bhi post kee thee ? confused
journal main to nahi perhee thee ?
kahir app kay PM ka intizaar raahay ga : D dhiyan say kaheen itna intizar na karaye ga kay *AM **he ho jaye *naraz