aa'ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia

[Koyal]

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aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia
ya jee na skooN wo baat karo is baar mera dil toota hia

maiN bhool na jaa’ooN sawaN ko ansoo ki tamana’yeN karti
aik baar he ankooN maiN utro is baar mera dil toota hai

maloom na tha k rastey maiN tum be na rahoo gaye sath meray
kab maiN ne kaha tha saath chaloo is baar mera dil toota hia

shaa’ed wo taranum pahlay sa mojood na ho gha tum meri
na gazal suno na geet parhoo is baar mera dil toota hai

aiey ahad-e-murawat k sathi! taskeeN meri bus is maiN hai
tum jab ye suno tu aah bharo is baar mera dil toota hai

is jheel maiN ab be akas tera thahra hai cho’at k lahjay maiN
taa’rooN se meri taqdeer bunoo is baar mera dil toota hai

tooti nahi ho ghi shaa’ed is saal khizaaN maiN daal koi
ye zulam nahi hai kam logo is baar mera dil toota hai

majboor hain yuuN tu sadioN se dukh dard maiN sherooN ko likhtey
ye gazal naa’ee lakiN na prho is baar mera dil toota hai *

[Daagh]

Re: aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

* is jheel maiN ab be akas tera thahra hai cho'at k lahjay maiN taa'rooN se meri taqdeer bunoo is baar mera dil toota hai

majboor hain yuuN tu sadioN se dukh dard maiN sherooN ko likhtey
ye gazal naa’ee lakiN na prho is baar mera dil toota hai *

bahot khoob Koyal jee…very very nice and touchy and beautiful…hum taa’roon se baat karte hai aapke liye nayi taqdeer bun ne ko

[Azad]

hummm
khass kam jahan pak

[Capricorn]

majboor hain yuuN tu sadioN se dukh dard maiN sherooN ko likhtey
ye gazal naa’ee lakiN na prho is baar mera dil toota hai

:k:

[WiseGuy]

Wah Wah :)

[chand_chehra]

very nice :k:

[ullujii]

Re: aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

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aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia
ya jee na skooN wo baat karo is baar mera dil toota hia

maiN bhool na jaa’ooN sawaN ko ansoo ki tamana’yeN karti
aik baar he ankooN maiN utro is baar mera dil toota hai

maloom na tha k rastey maiN tum be na rahoo gaye sath meray
kab maiN ne kaha tha saath chaloo is baar mera dil toota hia

shaa’ed wo taranum pahlay sa mojood na ho gha tum meri
na gazal suno na geet parhoo is baar mera dil toota hai

aiey ahad-e-murawat k sathi! taskeeN meri bus is maiN hai
tum jab ye suno tu aah bharo is baar mera dil toota hai

is jheel maiN ab be akas tera thahra hai cho’at k lahjay maiN
taa’rooN se meri taqdeer bunoo is baar mera dil toota hai

tooti nahi ho ghi shaa’ed is saal khizaaN maiN daal koi
ye zulam nahi hai kam logo is baar mera dil toota hai

majboor hain yuuN tu sadioN se dukh dard maiN sherooN ko likhtey
ye gazal naa’ee lakiN na prho is baar mera dil toota hai *

very nice
ps: is baar tu humra dil be toot gaya sab say

[AQ]

maloom na tha k rastey maiN tum be na rahoo gaye sath meray
kab maiN ne kaha tha saath chaloo is baar mera dil toota hia

shaa'ed wo taranum pahlay sa mojood na ho gha tum meri
na gazal suno na geet parhoo is baar mera dil toota hai

aiey ahad-e-murawat k sathi! taskeeN meri bus is maiN hai
tum jab ye suno tu aah bharo is baar mera dil toota hai

:( beautiful :)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

:( kion toota :(

[cuteepie]

awesome

[smilly]

ZaBeRdEsT :k: :k:

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by Masoom Muskaan: *
kion toota

ap ne tora na

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by smilly: *
ZaBeRdEsT :k: :k:

koN smilly sis..

[Koyal]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
maloom na tha k rastey maiN tum be na rahoo gaye sath meray
kab maiN ne kaha tha saath chaloo is baar mera dil toota hia

shaa'ed wo taranum pahlay sa mojood na ho gha tum meri
na gazal suno na geet parhoo is baar mera dil toota hai

aiey ahad-e-murawat k sathi! taskeeN meri bus is maiN hai
tum jab ye suno tu aah bharo is baar mera dil toota hai

:( beautiful :)
[/QUOTE]

thanks ...an how u feelin now?

[Koyal]

Re: Re: aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia

*Originally posted by Daagh: *

bahot khoob Koyal jee…very very nice and touchy and beautiful…hum taa’roon se baat karte hai aapke liye nayi taqdeer bun ne ko

sho nice of u…

PS: taa’roon se haal be poochna k kesay haiN wo :)..

[smilly]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

koN smilly sis..

poet aur woh sweet bechi jis nay share ki

[Koyal]

Re: Re: aa’ey shaam mujhay tum kuch na kaho is baar mera dil toota hia

*Originally posted by ullujii: *

very nice
ps: is baar tu humra dil be toot gaya sab say

hmmmm ap k pass BHE dil hai kia?

PS: v . thanks

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
very nice :k:

thanks chand g..

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by cuteepie: *
awesome

thank-U

[Koyal]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
hummm
khass kam jahan pak
[/QUOTE]

wishes neva come true..:)