aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa ...

Swera · May 15, 2003, 5:34am

Aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa

aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa
jo bhii degaa vahii Khudaa degaa

meraa qaatil hii meraa mu.nsib hai
kyaa mere haq me.n faisalaa degaa

zindagii ko kariib se dekho
isakaa cheharaa tumhe.n rulaa degaa

hamse puchho dostii kaa silaa
dushmano.n kaa bhii dil hilaa degaa

ishq kaa zahar pii liyaa ‘Faakir’
ab masiihaa bhii kyaa davaa degaa

Azad · May 15, 2003, 6:00am

humm

Dilsay · May 15, 2003, 8:53am

Very true.....

WiseGuy · May 15, 2003, 1:26pm

Nice one...
But I like your poetry... ;)

Swera · May 16, 2003, 2:55am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
humm
[/QUOTE]

........
thanks for humming.......

Swera · May 16, 2003, 2:56am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Very true.....
[/QUOTE]

:)

Swera · May 16, 2003, 2:58am

Thanks…

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 16, 2003, 3:24am

niceeee

koiDost · May 16, 2003, 9:37pm

Bohat khoob janab aik cheaz ki kami hai is main Jagit jee ki aawaz ki :)

Black_Mamba · May 26, 2003, 12:24pm

Re: aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa ...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa

meraa qaatil hii meraa mu.nsib hai
kyaa mere haq me.n faisalaa degaa

[/QUOTE]

Wah "What a SHAIR"

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · May 26, 2003, 12:49pm

:k:

Azad · May 26, 2003, 1:16pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

........
thanks for humming.......
[/QUOTE]

humain umeed hay aap 2nd thought sunnay main diljuspii nahi rakhtein :D