Guzare huve kal ki yaad aati hai
kuch lamhon se aankhen bhar aati hain
woh subah rangeen shaam nirali doob jati hain
jab aap jaise doston ki yaad aati hai
ai mere humnasheen chal kaheen aur chal
is chaman mein ab apna guzaara naheen
baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum
ab to kaanton pe bhi haq hamara naheen
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Buhat Khub:k:
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**Asif Is it your own poetry ??????? i'm sure its not urs .... please next time send your choice in Intikhab .....
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MODS bus apnay thread kay peechay lagay rahtay hain na 
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aap ne to saara mazza hee kharab kar dyaa :)
I wrote the first poem and the second I read somewhere (anonymous)
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Bachon wali harkat ki GA apna ilzam dosron pr Ghalti tumhari hy tumhin wazahat krni chahy thi.Dosra part I guess Muni begam ki ghazal hy bari mashhor o maroof is ki wajah sy tumhari Apni(agar waqai Apni hy) Shairi bhi mashkook ho gai so bhiya alag alag thread kholny thy yah meri trha wazahat kr dyty na:fifa:
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ok:)
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Yaar Kuch Khuda Ka Khouf Karo Tum Ramzan ka maheen hay 
first poem bhi tumhari naheen hay meray bhai ! 
… Should i send some proof ???
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^ bhai mere itna juzbaati aur autaula hone ki zaroorat nahin hai.......I had read these poems a while back (posted on the net by an anonymous person) and I was only kidding when I said that I had written the first one........ ab mein yeh to nahin keh saktaa keh jaa ke thunda paani pee lo magar apna roza mut kharaab karo :)
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**:k: yah hoi nah achi baat **
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autaula mujhy buhat pasand aya 
is ka matlab achi urdu bolny or janny walon ka qahatu rrijal nahi hy.:k: Magar sachi bat hy mujhy andaza naho hoa tha k pehli bhi tumhari nahi.
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mind blowing , amazing , lovely. aisi pyari poetry share kartie raha kijiye.