Aa Dost!

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 11, 2004, 10:49pm

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tum to kehtay thay waqat ka guzarnay ka sath sath
hum dono sub kuch bohl jayein ga
per Aa Dost!
yahaan to waqat kuch tehra hoaa lagta hai…
tum to kehtay thay ka her lambee kali raat kay baad
soraj nikalta hai
naee umeed ke kirnon kay sath
per Aa Dost!
Apne Qismat dekh kar to
Andehron ka basera lagta hai…
tum tu kehtay thay ka tumhein muskelon
ka samna karna acha lagta hai…
tohkarein kah kar samhalna acha lagta hai…
nayay chehrayo sa milna acha lagta hai…
nayay sathe ka sath chalna acha lagta hai…
Per Aa dost!
Aaj tumhare dam-dorte hoee guftago,
chehray ke tahkawat,
Tapta hoaa chehra,
Tahkay hoay Qadam
dekh kar to mujhe kuch aur he pata lagta hai…

By: Me.
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cuteepie · January 12, 2004, 12:28am

:k: :k: :k:

very nice

_TaNhAyAaN · January 12, 2004, 1:18am

Wow gk, it's a very thoughtful poetry, masha'Allah you did a wonderful job with conveying your thoughts.. keep writin'. :-)

AQ · January 12, 2004, 1:32am

system · January 12, 2004, 10:04am

zabardast ghazal, bohat hi achi likhi hai :k::k:

Desi_oul · January 12, 2004, 10:18am

^^ ^^

Swera · January 12, 2004, 12:52pm

:k: bohat khoob.

system · January 12, 2004, 3:59pm

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what? :)

Amarbail1 · January 12, 2004, 6:40pm

Re: Aa Dost!

Really impressive as every word has its own beauty :k::k::k:
Im glad to see you with this effort …
Keep it up Ghazal and all the best for future … Be happy !

Dilsay · January 14, 2004, 2:28pm

Wonderful and nice to see something from you after along time

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 15, 2004, 11:40pm

cuteepie thanx yaara*hugz*

~TaNhAyAaN~ appi thanx a bunch*hugz* and inshAllah likhte raho gee...:~)

** Anwar bahii** Thanx for the flower*hugz*

**Vivacious** yaar thank uu soo much*hugz*

Desi$oul thanx for coming in my thread dear:~)

Swera thanx yaara*hugz*

Amarbail thanx

Dilsay thank uuu so much*flowerz*

nikii · January 19, 2004, 8:22am

woww ghazal janu zaberdast :k:

Pyara_sa_doost · January 19, 2004, 10:04pm

bohat koohhbb ghazal wpw kiya bat he very nice shairy muuuuuuuuuah

Dania · January 20, 2004, 3:46am

beautiful nazm :k: keep it up

chodhry · January 20, 2004, 4:26am

Good, bohat alla :k:

btw kia pata chalta hay aap ko

AQ · January 21, 2004, 6:14am

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 21, 2004, 8:48pm

** niki appi** thankooooooo and y teary face:kiss:

Pyara sa doost thanx a lot:flower1:

Dania_2000 thank u soo muchhh:hug:

chodhry thanx:flower1: aur apko kion bataoo:hoonh: :-p

Anwar bahii

Nickless · January 22, 2004, 1:39am

Jo aapko nahi chal sakta lol…

ghazal itz a nice one… very expressive.. :~)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 24, 2004, 1:06am

Nickless thankkz yaara:hug:

Golden_Scorpion · January 28, 2004, 3:55am

GKK dear .. very Nice