One wish, one word, one order
I fly faster than the wind
By your side forever
To ease your pain
Wherever I may go
I am always near at heart
Crossing gaps, binding banks
Understanding and breaking borders
I whistle a tender song
To relieve your work stress
I pour cold water at your forehead
Whenever you suffer a fever
I bear your burden
No more pain in your thoughts
I temper your troubles
With loud children laughs
I fill your dear heart
With all love on earth
I exude the red rose
To suggest garden dreams
May you always be smiling
To the one I will love.
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Beautyful...What a sheen your poems have...You are really great...One of the greatest poem I´ve read in my life...Believe me, not many people can write such things...You are very talented...Make something of it, don´t waste it...
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Thank you very much…
i don’t waste it i share with my fellow guppies:hug:
Golden_scorpion thanx very much for liking all my poems:)
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what you mean to the one you WILL love? ![]()
or was it written before u met me? ![]()
Nice poem hon.
keep it up. :k:
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second saying I have not met you:( …
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hello how r u? i really liked your poem its great and even very touching poem. May God bless you.:)
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Lovely_me: I am fine, thanx for your kind comment
Barbie_Girl:THANK YOU
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thats deep ![]()
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thats good. ur most welcome.
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^^^nice poem, is that a first try on GS...you should post your own thread..you deserve it!
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thanx for ur commit tell me how to post im new so dont know much.
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comment sorry:)
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when you visualise the thread poem2 index clic on forum tools - open a new thread..that is as simple!
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Lovely.... !
You dont have to post it Seperate.... I did it for you :)
PS: For Next time, Do as NOOR said. Open New Thread and Post all your poems there.
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thankyou very much Golden Scorpian:)
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hmmmmm nice :k:
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Very nice poem… :k: ![]()
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wow
nice