A VERY SAD POEM...MADE ME CRY

saqijani · October 21, 2009, 5:03pm

YE POEM NAZRON SE GUZRI…SHAYAD SHAIRI BOHOT MAZBOOT NAHI HAI…LEKIN KHAYAL ITNA SHADEED HASSAS AUR DARD BHARA HAI KE BE SAKHTA ANKHAIN BHAR AYEEN..

DEKHO…
EK LAASH PARI HAI..
KHAAK AALOODA..
BIKHRI BIKHRI..

GHAIR YA APNA??KAUN HAI JANAY??
AO DEKHAIN AUR PEHCHANAIN…
NAQSH MITA DALAY BAROOD NE..
RANGAT KHOON MEIN DOOB GAYI HAI..

JEIB TATOLO KIA RAKHA HAI??
YE DO KHOON SE TAR GAJRAY HAIN..
DAS DAS KE DO NOTE RAKHAY HAIN..

HAATH JO NEECHAY DABA HUA HAI..
IS KI SAKHT GIRIFT MEIN KIA HAI??
SHAYAD HAI SCHOOL KA BASTA!

YE IK PARCHA??KHAT HAI SHAYAD!
TOOTI PHOOTI SI URDU MEIN..
RANGEEN PENCIL KE RANGON SE..
LIKHA HUA HAI!!

"AAJ JO BHOOLAY BASTA MERA..
KATTI HO JAYE GI AAP SE
TOFFEE AUR BISCUIT BE LANA
PIARAY ABBU JALDI AANA"

redidentity · October 21, 2009, 5:07pm

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.. em speechless..

made me shiver..

EyEsOnSkY · October 21, 2009, 5:11pm

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realy dard bhare haliya Pakistan pe ek gamnak nazam hai

thanks for sharing

Mono · October 21, 2009, 7:09pm

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wel..itz juss.....dnt knw wat 2 say..

Aryaan · October 21, 2009, 9:21pm

Really sad one SaQi..:(

terray_naam · October 22, 2009, 1:52am

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very sad aj kal hamare watan ka sab se bara almia he ye

Decent_Munda · October 22, 2009, 6:21am

dont have words............................... kch kehne ko baki hi nahi.

LP · October 22, 2009, 6:37am

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speechless

rajey · October 22, 2009, 7:24am

Jaanwar, Kameeney dahshatgardon ko in lines ka matlab samajh aa jaye to aise dardnaak manzar na dikhen.

Kya in lines ko padne ke baad bhi kisi ke dil me insaan aur insaan ke beech kisi tarah ka fark karne ki jurrat paida ho sakti hai??

saqijani · October 22, 2009, 3:29pm

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hum sub dard e dil rakhnay walay log hain...shayiri bhi hassas dilon he ki tarjuman hoti hai...sab ko dunya bhar mein dehshat ka bazar garam karnay walon ke khilaf ek hona hoga...warna hamari haalat pe koi tars khanay wala b na rahay ga...na sirf pakistan ke andar maujood dehshat gardon se jaan chhurana hogi balke aalmi taqton ka zulm bhi rokna hoga..

Shazia_Arif · October 22, 2009, 3:51pm

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v tuchy u got the right title MADE ME CRY.

saqijani · October 23, 2009, 3:33pm

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thanx shazia

Shab-e-Hijar · October 23, 2009, 5:32pm

:(

seem · October 25, 2009, 9:47pm

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:( really vary sad

Saqi_the_angel · September 27, 2011, 4:29pm

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sigh, it's very very sad.

brought tears in my eyes

jiia · September 27, 2011, 4:40pm

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aaaaaaawh ,laga dil noch k nikal lia kisi ne:crying:

Mirch · September 27, 2011, 4:47pm

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very sad.
Who's nazm is it ?

saqijani · November 10, 2011, 2:51pm

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ye tu nahi pata....lekin ye dard se bhari hai..

UZ · November 10, 2011, 3:38pm

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It is really sad :( ALLAH aisa waqt kisi pey naa laaye

pktun · November 11, 2011, 3:25am

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:hinna:
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