A Random Nazm

Salam People,

I have been reading your posts for about 5 years now but never took the trouble of posting one. I must say that some of the poetry posted here is quite impressive. To aap laugon ki Shairi sey impress ho kur mein bhi kuch post kur raha hoon..Iski history batata chaloon keh merey eik buhut hi qareeb keh dost ney mera haal chaal poocha, to yeh nazm mainey uskay jawab mein likhi hai..Kuch random hai, kuch funny hai, kuch gehraai hai aur kuch udaasi bhi..baaki judge aap laug karein..

Jawab

Mera chamchaa bhi theek hai
Meri train bhi waheen ki waheen

Project puhunchnay laga hai ihtitaam ko
Bus Kuch aakhri din hain uskay bachay

Khurd ka jo samaan hai hur weekend pur laata hoon ab
Purr roz dukaandaar sey zaroor milnay jaata hoon ab

Cigarette ki dabi khareedna kuch ihsaan sa lagta hai ab
Dil jalanay ka samaan hai . dil to yoon hi jalta hai ab

Bhindi ab mugh sey pakti naheen
Ab to faakon pur hi guzaar hai

Kamra mera hai bhikra para us shaks keh intizaar mein
jo aakur phir sey issey aapnay haathon sey nikhaar dey

kitchen ka jo safar hai ..kuch taveel sa lagta hai ab
jaata hoon bus mein wahan..cigarrete ki bachi raakh ko bakhairnay

merey kapron ki silwatoon mein ..basi teri khusboon keh khauf sey
almari ko apni mein kum hi kholta hoon ab

baaki bachi meri mehfilein
to woh ab bhi rangeen hain

fark sirf itna hai keh..
inmein tu naheen teri yaadein hain ab

Imran

Thank you

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Imran.. i dont know k kesi lagay yeh nazm doosron ko magar mujhe buhat achi lagi.. mano na mano but i shivered while i was reading dis.. buhat saada.. n very sweetly presented..

keep sharing..

Regards,

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by the way.. Welcome to the Forum.. :bb:

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Imran bhai welcome on gs as i dedicated a thread to people who were nt registered ( khamosh parhnay waloon k naam ) if aap ki nazron se guzra ho to meri mehnat wasool ho gayi :) ( in intikhaab)

Ps Nice sharings

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:hehe: what a lovely khat :smiley:

thanks for sharing with us and welcome to gupshup …

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Salam Again,

Nice to hear back from you guys..Waisay I am happy..keh poetry section keh merey tein favourite guppies ney reply kiya..thank u thank u...

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haww.. favourite guppies..

:blush: :bobo: thnx :stuck_out_tongue:

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Being Lonely Sahib..Parhi to zaroor hogi magar ab mera hafza hi itna zaeef hai keh yaad naheen..lekin aapki post ki hoi aksur parhi hai...

kaafi dard bhari shairi post kartay hain aap...lagay rahain lagay rahain

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Hmm............
Achee nazam hai.....Zara Different.......
Parh kar Acha laga

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nawazish..

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its ok:)

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its good
firstly because it sounds original
and second..anyone can relate to it..cuz it talks abt cigs se leker kitchen tak