~ A Poem ~

aabla_pa · January 5, 2008, 9:23pm

Bohot hoshiyaar hon, apni larai aap larta hon
Mein dil ki baat ko deewaar pay likha nahi karta

Agar par jaaey aadat aap apnay saath rehnay ki
Ye saath aaisa hai k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta

Zameen pairon se kitni baar hi din mein Nikalti hai
Mein aesay haadson pe Dil magar chota nahi karta

Tera israar sar aankhon pay tujko BHOOL jaanay ki
Mein koshish kar k dekhon ga magar WAADA nahi karta

muncho · January 5, 2008, 9:27pm

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very nice abla g

bheegiyaad · January 5, 2008, 9:32pm

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**Zameen pairon se kitni baar hi din mein Nikalti hai
Mein aesay haadson pe Dil magar chota nahi karta **

kahnay ki batein hean yeh sab

P.S nice sharing :k:

aabla_pa · January 5, 2008, 9:58pm

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:apni himmat hai k hum phir b jiyay jaatay hein"

bheegiyaad · January 5, 2008, 10:00pm

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jiyay jatay hean q k zindagi par ikhtayar nahi

aabla_pa · January 5, 2008, 11:15pm

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muhabbat mein hum to jiyay hein, jiyein gay
wo hon gay koi aur mar jaanay waalay

NikamiJano · January 6, 2008, 2:55am

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v nice ablapa:)

Dushwari · January 6, 2008, 3:15am

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very nice nazam aabla pa.

'Agar par jaaey aadat aap apnay saath rehnay ki
Ye saath aaisa hai k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta'

iss sooret meye durust heye keey neik nitatee ho linkage meye.
very nice two liner on relationship.

best,
Dushwari

Azad · January 6, 2008, 3:29am

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hummm

Shab-e-Hijar · January 6, 2008, 3:32am

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ye to ap bohat hi acha kartay hain

sunny_nicky · January 6, 2008, 7:40am

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buhat khoob :)

aabla_pa · January 6, 2008, 4:02pm

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^^hai na

aabla_pa · January 6, 2008, 4:03pm

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Thank u everybody........
And Dushwari 4 comments. They're rite i guess . :D

nokia_n70 · January 6, 2008, 6:33pm

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bohat khoob
plz tell me aap yeh poetry kiss site say letay hain plz tell me

aabla_pa · January 6, 2008, 6:41pm

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sab kuch bata don??? :D

nokia k n70 .... ab mein aapko kya bataon. shairi se meri muhabbat bhot puraani hai. ab yaad nahi kahan kahan se kya kya kuch parha tha.
ab to kher itna parhnay ka time hi nahi milta. kuch dost sms kar dete hein. kuch ehbaab email kar dete hein. bas aesay hi hai.

www.urdupoetry.com

^^ check this out.

Precious_Khan · January 6, 2008, 7:38pm

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Buhat khoob :~)