A Masterpiece

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I thought it was a masterpiece, my Literature teacher thought it was a crap-piece. What do you think?

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If you think that looks are more important than character…** YOU’RE DAMN RIGHT!!!**

[This message has been edited by The Hunk (edited August 12, 2002).]

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Your teacher is right…

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nooo.. its cute... the good thing about poetry is that it doesnt have to be any format....

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This is "azaad" English poetry I guess. Well its not poetry - its something in the middle of Poetry & Prose.

Idea is good - pass it through the metre & rod.

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I think you need improvement but the idea is good. Keep trying

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Jitna Diya Sarkar Nay Mujko, Itni Meri Auqat Nahi, Yeh Saab Tumhara Karam Hai Aqa, Mujh Mein Aisi Koi Baat Nahin.

It is difficult to say what is impossible, for the dream of yesterday is the hope of today and the reality of tomorrow.

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its a bit confusing..

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nice

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is your name Mohammad Ali?

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I love your handwritng…as for your thoughts..they are yours and if they are beautiful to you..then they are..period.

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sweetie , get out a thesaurus. Use some fancy words, and put a whole lot more thought into it - and you'll do a whole lot better.

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looks good to me

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Mohabbat Tou Khuda Bhi Karta Hai Apne Rasool Say

You Beter Never Take Me Serious