A ghazal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Barang e Majnoon, sitam guzeeda, mai teri rahon pe chal parha hon
Mai gardishon mai ghira hua hon, mai gard mai, gard ho chala hon

Mohabbaton mai dawaam kaisa, ye kya hikayat suna rahe ho
Ye aik pal javidan hai, mujhey samaito, bikher raha hon

Mai rang e darya, wo mauj e sehra, mai be karaan aor saraab hai wo
Wo mujhko rasta dikha raha hai, mai charh raha hon, utar raha hon

Wafa ki wadi ko ja rahe ho, tumhara bhi mujhsa haal na ho
Shajar ka zard ashk ban gaya hon, khizan se rishta nibha raha hon

Na shauq e azm e junoon baqi, na assra, intazar baqi
charagh e sheri sa hogaya hon, sulag raha hon, pighel raha hon

Ye tishna ankhein faraib nazri ki ab aziyat na seh sakengi
Tum apne daway sanbhal rakho, mai rayegani se ashna hon!

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Re: A ghazal

ghazal is very beautiful.. is it ur own?

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buhut hi aala,umda andaz-e- bayan hy ...thanks

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Forsure. shayd tarz mardana hai isliye ap ko shak hua :blush:

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Re: A ghazal

thanks S.786.

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Re: A ghazal

nice ,u used hard words:D

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Very beautiful:)

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lolx.. nahi aisi baat nahi..

actually itnay mushkil alfaaz ka istimaal aaj kal buhat uncommon hai.. jabhi was surprised.. as well as impressed..

keep sharing..

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very beautiful mirage…keep it up:lajawab:

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Re: A ghazal

:eek:

wah sahib … bohat khoob

mujhe lag raha hai shoa’ra-e-gupshup forum kay din phirnay waly hain… we’ve got some very talented poets and poetesses here

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thanks pingu. Yea they are like fits :phati:

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thanks redi, muddi, and abeeha.

~~~Missing Someone~~~
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:chai:

Ba Hazoor Sarwar-e-SarwaraN (Naat Competition)
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Re: A ghazal

very nice gazal. really gets to the core of and points it all out to beyhisee itself.